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| Lady Henrietta 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseThis is funny and so natural. I hope they do this on the show. Nice job :D. |
| Mariel3 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI really, really liked the rhythm of this. The bracketed asides were a lovely balanced thing. Do you mean 'She'd be home soon enough, anyway?' at the end? Thanks for posting this. I enjoyed it thoroughly! |