It seems like it's going to be interesting... You should write the next chapter

Please continue, it really is fantastic. i don't think ill ever be able to write something like that

cool

The story looks promising. Update soon? ^^

dammit. no pairings...
woulda liked some yullen going on
oh well...please update soon!
d.gray-man is on hiatus AGAIN!
god i could kill something RIGHT NOW.
i feel like KANDA!
anyway, just had ter rant sorry.
update soon!

:/ Poor Allen... so much pressure.

it's good so far. I'm looking forward the next chapter. you did well with Allen becoming a general (unnoficially), i liked the self introduction.
Komui leaving the room is a bit odd though, aren't they in his office?
i happy you want to stick with the cannon facts. The fandom lacks of those fics really.
hope you update

nice story, its interesting and yet not draggy. awesomee general allen walker!!

i hope you update soon! ^^

good luck on the plot, it's an interesting beginning and I look forward to seeing what you come up with ^_^

You have a nice writing style :) I think the idea of Allen being a General was a good one and can't wait to read more

nice! looking forward to more!

hehe, I like it. update soon please! It's really well written, though the way general sokaro acted reminded me of kanda after lenalee stopped him from killing allen when they first met ^_^

AWESOME story. I love how Allen's not OOC at all. ^^

looking forward to the next chap!