PS - I forgot to mention in my previous review the following...

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE WHAT GIBBS SAID TO LEE WHEN THE AGENTS WERE GEARING UP IN THE GARAGE!

Hi JMK! I've read all of your Season 1 stories.

1) I love how you actually did a whole season with a running theme - Just as it would run on a real-life episode, Kudos!

2) While there are fictional twists in the characters, none of them are completely OOC (well, except Ziva but it's still pretty good).

3) The dialogues are very interesting and entertaining. It takes a lot of skill to do that!

4) The information is sound. It shows that you know what you're talking about very well.

5) I really like that there's continuity (everything ties together in a nice bow at the end) and development (Michelle and Jimmy get engaged).

6) While I do not especially like this new image of Tim McGee who's like a little boy whos love/sexlife Freud can go on and on about, you did a really great job keeping his personality (passive, caring, loving, understanding, need I say more?) really accurate.

7) I'm super glad you incorporated Jeanne in the story and keep referring to Kate Todd.

You did a really great job with these stories. I can't wait to read Season 2 as well as your short stories.

Good luck and all the best!

-Danielle

Oh Jim, you had to do it, right? even if I knew it, it kills me, I am sorry I have not been reviewing a lot lately, you have no idea how much work I have this days, but I read, and I love your way of writting.

Until the next!

Way to go George. Nicely done.

Lisa

Absolutely wonderful. I have truly enjoyed this entire series you have created. I cannot wait for more.

Absofriggenlutely LoVe it! Glad McShav finally got their heads on straight. Looking forward to Season 2. Happy writing!

Excellent fic. I do feel badly for Agent Lee and Ziva. Reward them with a cookie next time, ok.

Looking forward to Season 2!

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. Please keep them coming!

Ha! I knew it! Lovely chapter.

I am truly enjoying this post and series. I hope you keep writing NCIS fics they have been interesting and challenging to read. I am still trying to figure out the killer.

Lisa

You really know how to ramp up the tension. I want to know Abby's findings!

Very good chapter. I know, let's lock McGee and Siobhan in a room together and see what happens?

I am continually amazed as to how you weave all your ideas together! Please keep going!

Wow looks like the directors is annoyed.

A 35mm round? That's a cannon! That's bigger than the rounds that the tank killing Gatling gun mounted on the A-10 uses! What sort of murderer is going to pack a gun so big they can't conceal it and that the recoil is going to be so big it'd take their arm off? A 3.5mm round I could believe but that is a bit small. But it'd still be effective.

Sorry to be a grouch, still loving the story.