ahaahahha a clever plan from a clever man

:D great story, well written and good story line :)

Eeek! That's an interesting effect for the vortex to have, and a very Master-like plan for the Master to come up with. And I like the end- it's always interesting to see these explorations of how Jack feels about how the Doctor feels about the Master. Nice story, thanks!

You've really captured the Masters brilliant evilness in this fic. He's very mean and nasty but you've just gotta love him! :-)

And I quite like 10/Jack pairing, because it's so obvious!

Well done on this!

wow...that was really good!

The Master has them both...Or does he? It might be check and mate but he hasn't as yet won the war. A good start is their more?