I liked this. (: Great job! Very interesting.

I'm likin' it. Love the way you described Ricky! He's my favorite character. Update soon!

I think that you should continue on this story. I noticed that you started writing this two years ago, and havent continued since. you should continue on it. You have some major talent. Finish this story and let all people see it.

This a lovely version of how Ricky and Lucy met! I saw the episode where Lucy and Ricky meet, (it's on youtube.) And it's actually pretty hilarious, since Lucy and Ricky claim in the beggining that they both aren't eachother's 'type'. Your story is really good too, I like how Ricky asks if Lucy is really that red.

i love i love lucy its awesome i never knew they had a spot for it yayayayaayayayay but i love it

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Very cute! I am a great fan of I Love Lucy too. By the way, exactly how do you pronounce her name? And I thought Ricky was Mexican!

WalterUnaForever (Do I sound familiar?)