! You have a real talent with this. Your rhymes are delightful and unexpected (I don't catch myself thinking 'oh she's going to rhyme that with __) and your meter rocks.

This really is lovely; and with a great idea behind it. Delight to read.

Lovely, Arian. Beautiful word choice and rhyme. It shows well how the Narnians would have felt the first winter after the hundred year one.

Oh, well done! It's always a treat to read a poem where the author realises the effect and importance of good rhyme and meter.
First-rate stuff, in both mechanics and imagery. Well done indeed!

wow that was beautiful!

*claps!*

Wow. Very smooth, excellent use of rhythm. As smooth as ice, perhaps I should say? Well done.

That was good. I especially like the part about Winter not being "nice." That sounds like a Narnia thing.