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| Lysis 2008-05-13 ch 2,  | abuseWonderful, and exciting! I just really enjoyed this second chapter. I liked the way you tied in the characters from "The Golden Treasures of Friendship". Very creative and it worked beautifully. It seems someone must put some reigns on Alexander or he'll end up killing himself before he's 40! I love his amorous attack on Hephaistion while Hephastion was cooking. I could just see Hephaistion with his beauituful red, gold hair streaming down his back. It seems only he can truly heal whatever ails Alexander. You're stories are just a treat. Incidentally, as I write this reivew, I notice an advertisement below the page for "Wolve Ringtones" at . did you plant that there? If not, it's quite an interseting co-incidence. Lysis (Elizabeth |
| Lysis 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseDear Northern-Light, As always your stories are more than just stories, they are magical like the bards of old would sing. I love the little amorous tumble Hephaistion springs on Alexander and then Alexander's ill timed plunged in the cold water. What was wrong with that boy! Oh, I forgot he's Makedonian, no other explaination needed. This is great and wonderful beginnging. Looking forward to more. Love, Lysis (Elizabeth) |
| Anime Princess 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThis is yet another AWESOME story by you, my friend. I can't wait to see (read) how Hephaestion will keep Alexander alive this time! POST MORE ASAP! I LOVE how you have the animals perspective in some places and how they talk to one another and their masters...that is GREAT! POST MORE ASAP! |