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| shelter 2008-05-13 ch 1,  | abuseIf this is what you get during writer's block, then I think I should also join you. I can see that the seasons idea has been reused far too many times. But you have a good summary, and using the idea of the Hyuga compound's garden (even though it's not mentioned in the fic later) as a backdrop is good. I guess what made this one-shot good for me is how the moods mirror the seasons. A but cliched I suppose, but your presentation of Hinata & Neji in the garden as the seasons recycle themselves is something refreshing, insightful. |
| .bulanbiru. 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuse. dunno what to say. sweet? sad? .both. ^^ gomen ne, |
| ChibiChibi 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think I caught some symbolism. Well... Good job. |