Oh, I am turning into such a Seth/Tolten fan that I'm worrying myself. I love this paing at the moment. I really enjoyed this fic and you capture Seth and Tolten very well, especially Tolten's inexperience and nervousness. And, you just know Tolten totally has a crush on Seth haha. Poor guy, she just drags him along everywhere. I also really like the ending, with Tolten staggering after them, not really understanding the pirates. Aww.

Anyway, I really liked your fic; there should be more Seth/Tolten fics on this site!

This was a great story! Everyone was in character and I could see how Tolten might develop a liking for Seth. You captured Tolten perfectly-he certainly has little confidence in his abilities and I like how you described his amazement in being able to cast a spell. Nice believable back story for this scene in the game.

I love this story and this pairing so much 3 I think a one-sided thing is just cute :D Tolten is so adorable and you got all of their characters down pat so kudos and great story. Keep writing Tolten/Seth preze! :D

I am so glad that there is a Tolten/Seth story! I liked Kaim/Seth from the beginning, but I think a one-sided Tolten to Seth thing would have been cute. Both of them likiing each other is cute too :D But I wish there were more people who liked this pairing, because I sure do! This was a great story. Keep writing!

Only Tolten/Seth story I've found, and BOY am I glad that it's a good one.

hi!

I love the story and you are awesome at showing the character'e emotions!

Seth/Tolten, not sure about that myself... but still everyone has there own opinion.

Have you ever thought about Kaim/Seth. I think because, no offence to Kaim, he can be a bit of a dull character and I think the Seth's bubbly personality would liven him up a bit. Also they would be cute together and generally I don't like Sarah because I don't see the point of her in the game and Mack and Cooke (especially Cooke)seem to love Seth anyway so why not!

Anyway, fantastic story! Keep it up!

I've read a lot of your writings and you do a magnificent job at showing the character's emotions and personalities. You are clearly talented and I can't wait to read more.

Wow, this is a very accurate portrayal of Tolten. Of all both of them, really. Keep up the good writing, yeah?

Haha, this was a nice fic. In-character, and entertaining.

I might actually like this pairing!

I actually like this pairing alot. As far as I can tell, Tolten is actually pretty tough, and while not the toughest, he can hold his own.

Hah! This was an amusing, entertaining version of this portion of the story.

First, I must compliment you on the beginning of this. It set the mood for the story perfectly: slightly romantic, slightly funny, very energetic.

Also, you nailed every character's personality here, especially Tolten. In a way, the guy's dumber than Jansen, but hey, at least he's got good intentions. I'd think he would be hard to get, but apparently you had little trouble with him.

I think the idea of Tolten and Seth together is pretty cute. After all, I thought her and Jansen would be a bit cliche because the annoying one and the assertive girl always get together (besides, he fell for Ming), and Kaim is just too dull for the energetic, adventurous Seth, so Tolten's left over. Well, she doesn't necessarily have to be with anybody, but let's face it: no matter what happens, Tolten's going to need someone sensible to help him with big, kingly decisions.

Awesome job with this. I'm definitely faving it.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Great Story I cant wait for more. I love The idea of Tolten and Seth. Update soon!

Yay, first Seth/Tolten story! Kudos, dude.

So incredibly funny, I love the added dialogue and my favorite part was probably Seth kicking Tolten into the manhole. Completely in character and an awesome story. Love it!

I love Seth! You can probably tell from my username...

Tolten/Seth do make a good couple