First of all I find It a
bummer to sign up to post
a review so please try to
fix that problem. But apart
from that I seem to notice
that everyone just seems to
praise your story. Well either
they are just being to kind to
you so that they don't hurt
your feelings or what I don't
know. But I am not like other
people with me you will only
get the truth, the whole truth
and nothing but the truth.

So here is my verdict. I really
don't know if you actually have a
guy called Derek who Beta Reads
this story and helps you out with
your English because you have terrible
grammar in your two stories that I have
read and both of them have been Beta read
by Derek. So maybe you need a better Beta
tester.

Apart from this point your stories are
generally pretty funny and if I try really
hard and avoid your faults I can enjoy them.
But if you intend to have such mistakes in
your stories please don't make them more
than two chapters because then I won't be
able to handle them.

You have the potential to write great stuff
unlike me so I am going to wish you the best
of luck in your future endeavors and I am
looking forward to reading some of your future
works.

sorry for such a long review and I hope that
you don't get offended by it. I only mean the
best for everyone that I review.

Live Long and Prosper!

Yay! It was worth the wait to get to the end of this story. Even though it was short it was very well done. Well hope you are able to come up with more stories and chapters for the stories you are continuing. Keep up the great work.

Good story. Dinah is really evil! Nice Dinah/Oliver pairing too!

Please, get rid of the squares in Chapter 1!

good story

Nice start. Must be updated. But, please, use "", not the squares.

Great Start! Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens with Lois and Clark. PPMS :)

its good but you need to put quotes around when ppl are talking

can't wait for more

I like the start! This story has a good plot. One thing though, what's with the squares where the quotes should be? Other than that little distraction... I like it a lot!! GO CLOIS! :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)

update!!

great start!

good chapter & more please