This story was absolutely amazing. You fleshed out Ariana's character far beyond a tormented little girl and have given her focus and an actual voice outside the deeds of her oldest brother and his ever-ignored shortcomings. Bravo.

honestly the writting is good and everything but i dont understand the point of this story and its kinda boring cuz it sounds like she's talking to herself.. but anyway other then that it was good

Thought provoking to say the least.

signed the good dr.

It is very skillful writing, even if it is sometimes hard to see where it's going. After all, what are questions without answers? But I do love it.