I liked it, but I feel there's a void somewhere in the fic, I can't really point where...

Love it!

Excellent, excellent and...excellent!

Oh, god, you're unbearable! How many tapes have you seen? Like two or three? This is so perfect, so stand-alone perfect, it makes me jealous. I've not seen the events you allude to. Somehow, though, I understand what is going on perfectly, even though you explain so little. The emotion conveyed, the similes and metaphors employed; once again your wonderful hand has touched this story and made it so deliciously tangible and touchable, I ache to hold it like a teddy bear, close to my breast. I'd put this on my favorites but you yourself are already on there, so it would be redundant. Keep writing, and please accept that you've truly touched my heart, and that your tales really ARE as good as I say. -Otaku-

wwweeeelll, it's very, very good. I prefer *blushes* ShinjiXKaworu... but this is one of the best AsukaXShinji's I've read _

HEY! This screams sequel dont you think. you really know how to keep the reader interested. GOGOGOGOGO...

I like your rendition of this story. I think you did a very good job. There were no glaring mistakes, no errors grammatical or spelling wise. Some might disagree about Asuka's feelings, but I don't. hehe. After reading this I immediately wondered if you had made up a story of your own. And I will be looking for that in just a second. Keep up the good work.