Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Breaking the News - Page 1 of 2
bloodydisaster
2009-12-02 . chapter 1
I love this. I always imagined Sokka having a reaction like that to the idea that his sister wouldn't be virginal for all eternity.
Katsumara
2009-05-30 . chapter 1
Not sure how I didn't review this. Either way, I loved the tail end where Aang walked in, saw Sokka's look, and walked right back out.
Luiz4200
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Wise move, Aang.
Wolfdog-Aleu
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
I've no idea why, but I like these kinds of stories. Kataang family ones, that is. You get what I'm saying right?
:D
2008-10-26 . chapter 1
smart aang, very smart
The One And Only Lobster
2008-07-29 . chapter 1
Hahaha. :D Oh, Sokka. Oh, Katara. Oh, Aang. XD

"... I believe I was mostly at fault here, Sokka. I’m the one who took off his clothes, pushed him down, and–“
“Please stop talking. For the love of anything good and holy, please stop talking.”

Oh, Katara. :D That was mean. XD
LunarianPrincess
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
hhahaha that was awesome! i think you should continue ^_-LP
CyclonePsycho
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Haha, nice work. This idea can be a little overdone at times, but yours has its own uniqueness. Plus, it captures the characters' personalities well.

I don't have any complaints storywise, so I'll just skip this part of the review.

Great spelling and grammar structure. Great job with the narrating. You keep it to the point, yet detailed enough where the audience can understand the situation.

In summary, you are a wonderful writer.
TeamDavid
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
haha if i were aang id do the same thing!
Castoro Chiaro
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
I actually burst out laughing at the last line. I got a kick out of the mental image of Aang walking in all happy, seeing Sokka, and immediately turning in the opposite direction.

This was very well written. Great job!
Herpestidae
2008-06-10 . chapter 1
I lol'd
Mimo-Sene
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Oh that was a classic moment for Aang to walk in... Absolutely brilliant!
jaded image
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
Hahah, so cute :) I love Sokka and Katara's relationship, and I think you presented it very well. It was so much fun to read, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Also...KATARA'S HAVING AANG'S BABY!! XD

Yea, loved the fic!
LadyBaSingSe
2008-05-13 . chapter 1
OH MY GOD! That was a riot! LOL! I could so see that happening! Hahaha... Sokka...
Elyon's Servant
2008-05-05 . chapter 1
"Ok" I enjoied the story and you captured the characters very well, i'm not sure if i like that fact that you never say that any off them "Got" married, as in like a public thing. But i still enjoied it. I give it 3 stars, the only reason theres not 5 is because it;s not quit moral. But the story was good.
Return to Top