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| CyclonePsycho 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseHaha, nice work. This idea can be a little overdone at times, but yours has its own uniqueness. Plus, it captures the characters' personalities well. I don't have any complaints storywise, so I'll just skip this part of the review. Great spelling and grammar structure. Great job with the narrating. You keep it to the point, yet detailed enough where the audience can understand the situation. In summary, you are a wonderful writer. |
| Aangsgirl 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abusehaha if i were aang id do the same thing! |
| Castoro Chiaro 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI actually burst out laughing at the last line. I got a kick out of the mental image of Aang walking in all happy, seeing Sokka, and immediately turning in the opposite direction. This was very well written. Great job! |
| BaiMaoRieji 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI lol'd |
| Mimo-Sene 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseOh that was a classic moment for Aang to walk in... Absolutely brilliant! |
| jaded image 2008-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHahah, so cute :) I love Sokka and Katara's relationship, and I think you presented it very well. It was so much fun to read, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Also...KATARA'S HAVING AANG'S BABY!! XD Yea, loved the fic! |
| LadyBaSingSe 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD! That was a riot! LOL! I could so see that happening! Hahaha... Sokka... |
| Katara Water Warrior 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuse"Ok" I enjoied the story and you captured the characters very well, i'm not sure if i like that fact that you never say that any off them "Got" married, as in like a public thing. But i still enjoied it. I give it 3 stars, the only reason theres not 5 is because it;s not quit moral. But the story was good. |
| prettygirl17 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI seriously laughed out loud at the last sentence. This was beautiful. Fantastic. Hope to see more from you! |
| speechless8582 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAww...i really like future Kataang stories! And this one was so cute! XD |
| zukoismyprince 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI love this fic! Sokka is overprotective. I think he should take a chill pill. I mean, if he can do it with Suki than Katara should be able to do it with Aang. I think she should have told Sokka right away. He wouldn't understand but atleast he'd know. One last comment: RUN AANGY! RUN LIKE THE WIND! SOKKA'S A COMMIN'! |
| Ayva J. Damas 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseXD smart move Aang. Don't think it'll help you that much though... |
| BlueAura11 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWoah. That. Was. Cool! So,she is only sweet to her brother when she needs something or something is wrong? Woah. Poor Aang! He just entered and when he saw the look on Sokka's face he walked right out? Aw! Run Aang! Sokka's out to get ya! hahaha! Would love to see more from you! |
| crystal.elements 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, Sokka. I love you so much. |
| midnightwaters 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuse"I’m the one who took of his clothes, pushed him down, and–“ LOL Hilarious fic. |