Cool!

Wow...that was a great twist..Great JOB!

I got the human coliseum right!

Which is scary as it's human training in mine...

This is one weird coincidence.

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince and the Fifth Sutakage, out.

so human kind lost against a gay villager-trainer wuaw that was weird but in the good way.
i can´t believed it at all defeated by a ash the boy with gay tendencies, I could never imagined this kind of end
Godd weird end I like it

I want to see the ending.

Ebony and me-WE WANT TO SEE THE ENDING!

Me-You heard the psycho Espeon.

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.

Yeah I agree with you ash has a crush with lance (ash is gay not just gay hiper meega gay LOL)

All I can think of to say is I love reading this and would love to read it til the very end to know what will happen.

You need to read mine. LANCE IS THE VILLAIN IN MINE!

More lemos in mine, but that doesn't seem to matter after that chapter.
;)

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.

Once again you prove yourself to be quite the master lemon...lime writer shadowphantomness! I throughly enjoyed reading this...it absolutely made my day! Oh how I wish that it had lasted longer. I'm not one for long, complicated stories but when it comes to lemon and lime scenes I want as many details as I can muster. Once again I feel really uncomfortable telling you this but I do believe you had one, little mistake: When Lance said, "May I have tonight." I think you might have meant, "Can I have you tonight." instead. I don't know just something that I noticed. I hope you have another one of these chapters...oh (lol) and I really do hope Lance doesn't die. (Wink, wink)

Ooh! Ooh! They want to capture the people and make THEM fight!

And yes, that was mine and i used it. But there aren't enough fics that explore that idea! So i give it in friendship...

~general Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.

go quick! update! why arent lances pokemon with him?

Aww...no to offend but this was way too short. You could have at least left Duplica at a cliffhanger like...discovering somewhat what the Pokemon are up too before being confronted by them. But all honesty aside this still very intriguing.

Irvin Z. Martinez

nuclear weapons, that sound bad

I wrote this. Kind of. Ah well.
You didn't know.

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.

This story is really starting to get dramatic. It really has a sense of mystery...I also wonder what the Pokemon are doing. You are doing a wonderful job with this fic...please update soon. By the way I absolutely loved that cute little scene between Lance and Red! I only wish that it could have been longer. Perhaps there will be one later...(wink, wink) Lol oh and if I could offer my opinion on that last little note. Please, please, oh please don't kill Paul. Not because I am tenderhearted but because I personally believe that bad people suffer more in life than they do in death.

Again hope you update soon! And good luck on your finals! I know you can do it!

Irvin Z. Martinez