As with all of your stories, I have been quite enjoying this one. Your characterization of the various characters is well done and I really like how you have portrayed the relationship between Serena/ChibiUsa relationship and the Serena/Raye relationship. The only thing that disappointments me is that the story is building to its climax, which means that it will be over before long.

I did quite like the bit in the last chapter where Serena and Raye freaked out when they caught sight of ChibiChibi. I don't think I have have ever scene ChibiChibi portrayed as a harbinger of the apocalypse, but in retrospect she is that even if she is a very cute harbinger.

Keep up the good work and I am eagerly looking forward to reading the rest of the story.

Why did you have to stop!?! I want to read more.

I am in agreement with Luna about Molly. I do think that Molly is loyal to Serena but the level of commitment would be questionable.

I think that way that Reenie finally told Serena was good. Serena would react in that way.

There where some parts that were a bit confusing, the way that it jumped from what was spoken to what they thinking. Other than that it was a really great chapter. I look forward to reading more.

-ST

I COULD HUG AND KISS YOU BOTH, I'M SO HAPPY! I squeeled when I saw you have produced a third "Adventures of the ChibiScouts" story.

I first read I and II when they were posted on around 19, I think. I've re-read both a few times since. The end of II always makes me want to cry because of Amy is heartbroke over losing her sister to the other dimension. I can't wait to see how you finish up this trilogy, I hope that Amy is happy. I'll have to re-read them again to refresh my memory.

You two have made my day. This first chapter was very well writen. I was grinning like a fool, for joy, the whole time.

Since Lita is from the other dimension, is her D Point worse then the one that took place in her current dimension? I don't remember, does Amy know that her Lita died, because it seems that Amy was hiding somthing when she told Reenie.

May writer's block flee from you mighty pen(or keyboard) and the winds of inspiration see you through this and many more voyages of fiction.

-ST