that was awsome




plez continue and plez check out my stories and tell me if you like them if you don't then tell me in a nice way please

ALOHA!

...Hmm...Interesting story...I like the idea...
...
Especially the ending...(biggest in the universe indeed.)

...*goes off to read others*

This is really amazing.
:D

That was really good! The dialogue was totally snappy, and it was just... really pretty. An amazing representation of Sakura, I think, and, as I said, very pretty.

Beautiful last two lines. And the whole "Haruno Sakura now ranks with her once light-years away teammates" bit.

Well- it was good. I'm personally a fan of dialogue so I didn't like it as much, but it was still very interesting and was really well written. Great job!