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Reviews For: When the Night is Falling

nyakattia
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseI liked this, and believed the breakdown of her pride and strength that would see her running into his arms. I liked too, the way he fought with her, pushing her to acknowledge openly what he already knew. :P

Isn't it funny how sometimes they just work so well in friendship fics? I've got a few now, and every one of them was supposed to be a romance, but the friendship came though so strong I couldn't change it.
ThnksFrThMmrs87
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseExquisite
TutorGirlml
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseWow...just amazing...absolutely beautiful. This is so touching and real, and just seemed so true to both Stella and Flack's characters. Wonderful, wonderful.
Especially liked the line, "Its last victim was Don. She saw him, struggling to take care of her, to protect her, from all the things that he couldn't see. Even when she thought she was walking alone, he was only a few steps behind, an arm reached out a though he was always ready to catch her."
And the ending too..."Reaching out he gently took her by the hand, drawing her into the apartment and into his arms."
So glad I got to read it! Thanks for sharing!
KickassScot
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseAwesome. Loved that even after her trying to cope on her own, she at last reaches out for Don.
bookworm45
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseBeautiful. Love the last few paragraphs.
Mellow girl
2008-05-03
ch 1,
abuseThat was sweet!! I can see Stella being stuborn about not telling anyone about her dreams. Great Story!
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