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| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseExquisite |
| TutorGirlml 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWow...just amazing...absolutely beautiful. This is so touching and real, and just seemed so true to both Stella and Flack's characters. Wonderful, wonderful. Especially liked the line, "Its last victim was Don. She saw him, struggling to take care of her, to protect her, from all the things that he couldn't see. Even when she thought she was walking alone, he was only a few steps behind, an arm reached out a though he was always ready to catch her." And the ending too..."Reaching out he gently took her by the hand, drawing her into the apartment and into his arms." So glad I got to read it! Thanks for sharing! |
| KickassScot 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAwesome. Loved that even after her trying to cope on her own, she at last reaches out for Don. |
| bookworm45 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. Love the last few paragraphs. |
| Mellow girl 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet!! I can see Stella being stuborn about not telling anyone about her dreams. Great Story! |