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| space raider 2008-05-03 ch 1,  | abuseaww, nicely done and good job avoiding some obvious Valentine chilche. Great! Some of the imagery you conjured up was lovely. Some of the lines were grammatically awkward (i.e. the sentence starting with "A fierce battle") but still a pleasant fic :) I'm so jealous, Nick, and yet I don't want you to stop. Thanks Nick xoxo |
| A Hotter Kiss A Better Touc... 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseNick, loved this. It was very abstract, but I loved that you added the naughty neighbor listening in. Very nice!! |
| Sith Happens 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseM... I've always liked the romantic shite too ^_^ Hugs, ~Sithy |