though the parts on tai and en were alright... but i like kei stories the best! please write more kei stories instead! i love youko and keiki!~ haha! great fanfic!

beautifully written.

much enjoyed.

i liked it a lot. My favorite cahpter was 04. keep the good work
hope you'll update soon

your writing makes me melt into a pile of goo XD

awesome job I hope u keep writing

Very nice. I like the interaction between the two and the comfortable/accepting atmosphere.

just wondering - are u writing this based on the books or the anime? is there even a difference (besides the fact that the anime stopped rather abruptly)?

anywhoo, still love taiki, he was cute as a child. I wanna know what he looks like when he grows up. Too bad we'll never get to see it.

finnaly someone is writting again about twelve kingdoms

Thanks

I love Taiki! He's my favorite character of the 12 Kokuki. I've always been a little disappointed that the anime never showed us what happened to him and I've only just recently started reading the books. Anyways, I love this story, although I feel like Gyousou is a little cold. Keep it up!

Lovely work. Poor Taiki always carries such a heavy burden.

12K fiction! Yay! Great snippet, and I'm eager for more. I love the little peak at Youko and Taiki's relationship.

If it's not too terribly fangirlish of me, excuse me while I squee. Because Juuni Kokki just doesn't get enough love, and from you I'm expecting good things.

Very sweet first installment. :)