Reviews for Cover Up: The case of the Rhinestone Heartbreakers

Reviews For: Cover Up: The case of the Rhinestone Heartbreakers

spencerthekat 2008-05-12 ch 9,	abuseYou certainly got me on this one. I totally was NOT expecting the "goon" to be Richardson! :O Remind me NEVER to tick off Mac, will ya? He's very volatile when he's angry/worried...ROFLOL!! Hey, good thing that Sheriff J is a good shot too, would have hated to see Mac (who finally can hang on..heh heh) go flying down the highway on the hood! See Henry's connections are good for something. I wonder what the FBI is going to find in his "tacky funhouse". OMG - She trapped on the TOP OF THE OIL REFINERY! Ok, wicked funny "I've got a little bit of time to kill..." ROFLOL!! So Heather is the mastermind behind this plot to bring down Rollie Pollie! What a jerk she is - disposing of poor Mike like that. I think that Sheriff J is going to have a total field day when he finds that out! She's a sleeze! But wait...who's the ladies with the 4 lugs? Could that be Sabrina and her 'heavies'? Can't wait for the next installment!! U/Q :) ROFLOL p.s. Liked the fact that the models got self-defense training - it should so have been MANDATORY...LOL
spencerthekat 2008-05-09 ch 8,	abuseMrs. B, Just how much ANGST can you get into a chapter? Oh, let me count the ways! This whole chapter was TOTALLY AWESOME! Sheriff J, so nice bringing food and drinks for everyone for the shoot! OMG - 'hat & teeth' - ya think? lol. He seems sweet! So happy to see that he was there to help Mac save Dani! He's a good guy! No wonder why Dani likes him! OK...let's head to the RANCH! Let's check him all out...doh! :P MY HEAD...spinning...OK, so I think I get it now...so Sabrina's got goods on Rollie, setting him up, & using Heather as a pawn! This Sabrina chick's as twisted as Rollie!?! HEY WAIT...was that the "OTHER SHOE" I just read DROP! Reassignment! WOAH! She kinda flew off the handle with that one! NOW WHY WOULD SHE GO OFF ALONE!?! But at least she was quick thinking with scratching in the dirt! MAC IS SO GOING TO KICK SOME MAJOR 'TUBA' WITH THIS ONE! Now who this Masked Man? Who does he think he is blowing up boats (so sweet Mac telling Dani, no give up looking for her ::swoon::) & Kidnapping 'important people'! OMG - I'm screaming here! p.s. Rollie Pollie, Sleeping Satyr (omg - stop), duffel bag of tricks, Body Oil (EW! Ha Ha), mancake (Gretch so it the nail on the head with THAT ONE!)! WICKED FUNNY...ROFLOL! p.p.s. U/Q :P (ha ha ;)
spencerthekat 2008-05-08 ch 7,	abuseOH GROSS - "Rollie pollie" has cameras in the girls rooms! I bet the girls are more than a little creeped out by that! How tacty where the monitors were hidden! EW! GET OUT! There's a hidden passage ways! :O HA HA - one to the Pool! I'm with Gretchen on this one - TOTALLY Scooby Doo - JINKIES! So I wonder if Heather Floyd might be involved with this whole gang of theives? Did I read a slip of the tongue by Ms. Gretchen?!? HA HA. Guess Sheriff J really got something too!! ;) Glad that he was there while part of this mess was going down. EXCELLENT CHAPTER - I am really likin' this story - lots of twists and turns! :) p.s. “Mac, get up, get your lock pick and let’s go!” “It’s all in the reflexes.” - OMG - HA HA HA! Typical Mac/Dani responses :) p.p.s. Ma'am, the army poster (such a blase response), scooby doo, stealing cookies...roflmbopimp!
spencerthekat 2008-05-07 ch 6,	abuseWHAT was THAT all about!?! My head would be spinning with all this hot & cold stuff...lol. So glad to see that Mac WAS LISTENING to Gretchen when she was talking and not just blowing her off...ROFLMBOPIMP! OMG - Where did you come up with this last name...ROFLOLPIMP! I can't even pronounce it!! HA HA HA Gretchen so should NOT be allowed to freestyle her responses - Twister...Charades...HA HA HA. Loved the swiss watch lines ;) But she did a goot job in getting in with them & getting them caught! YAY GRETCHEN! OH...the PTSS, comes into play! OK..I admit, I did have to laugh at Mac getting clawed at by these theives - even though it is NOT FUNNY! :( LOL Good thinking on Gretchen's part in drugging them instead. OMG - those shoes certainly should be added to the realm of weapons...ROFLOL LOVIN' this story :) (u/q (hides) HA HA HA)
spencerthekat 2008-05-06 ch 5,	abuseOH...I'm liking this Sheriff J! ;) See I knew that there was more behind this 'oily' Rollie than just being duped by the pack of girl theives! Glad that Sheriff J was upfront with Dani about his suspicions on what might have happened to Mike Floyd! He seems like he is going to be a good partner to have in this 'side' investigation!! But I just can't see Dani getting all down & dirty eating ribs...HA HA HA...Just kidding :O p.s. Those Ford Pinto's I tell ya - FIREBALLS...LOL! :)
spencerthekat 2008-05-05 ch 4,	abuseEXCELLENT chapter title! You just had to throw Jack Striker in there - didn't ya! :P Poor Mackie's tortured soul - those mercenaries really played a number on his psyche! Hee Hee Ricky & the girls listening...LOL Certainly sounds like Gretchen is ready for action - she so will kick em to the curb if anyone messes with her! Looking forward to seeing what happens when they get to the bar! p.s. Gah - I so wanna pop him one upside his well couiffed side swiped 'do...ROFLOL
spencerthekat 2008-05-05 ch 3,	abuseHe WHAT?!?! Is HE INSANE! I think that all the Fish & Cheese has gone to his brain! ::grumble grumble:: I bet he was avoiding eye contact with the REST of the FEMALES on the plane! I don't care what his motives are...WRONG WRONG WRONG way to handle THAT!! Rollie certainly is a "piece of work" ain't he. I think the girls need to keep an eye on him while they are at his mansion! Why is it that 'gaudy rich people' always have icky taste in furnishings! I bet that Gretchen is glad to be 'in the know' with this assignment - it sounds like a doozy! Me thinks that Rollie is a bit too nervous in talking about Mrs. Floyd's late husband. Sounds like there might be a story there too?!? p.s. Cugel/hammer - WHATEVA! :) u/q = HA HA HA ;)
spencerthekat 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abuseNow if Mac wasn't a NIGHT OWL - the sun would not be a NEW CONCEPT to him...LOL! I would have paid big bucks to see Dani go down that Mud Slide in South America, I hope she was at least wearing sensible shoes. :O What's up with Mac being so coy with this assignment? This should be right up his alley. Gretchen will make for an excellent 'flirty theif' - glad to see that Henry has confidence in her abilities as well. Gretchen is very funny with these quips at Mac - you can tell she's got his number down pat...lol :) It is good to see that she deeply cares for his well being and safety on these assignments. But he's right that some decisions need to be made. Can't wait to read more = U/Q ::HIDES:: :P p.s. Way way way too many references in this one...Pool...spa...girl with the mole...MOMMY DEAREST...heels (an oldie but a goodie from story 1 ;)...and there are SO MANY MORE 0 I'm cracking up here...ROFLMBOPIMP!
spencerthekat 2008-05-04 ch 1,	abuseThat's what ya get when you mess around with strange women you meet at bars Rollie ~ they take ya for everything you got! Seems like that little black book is of some importance if he needs Outrider assistance! I hope that Henry can get him the right help he needs! This looks like its going to be a great story! Can't wait to read on! :)

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