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screamxheart
2008-08-07
ch 1,
abuseAw. That was really good.
I like the promise ring thing.
CantTakeMyEyesOffYou
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abuseThis actually made me cry, and I'm still crying now.
It was so, so beautiful.
I wish my first time had been like this, if it had I might be smiling, not crying. Wonderful, wonderful!
Onehopelesshero
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseA very well done piece of work. Thank you for not using slang. In todays woprdls that is really what intamacy has come down to. Its nice to know that tere are still people out there who treat it as more then just a temporary action that is only for pleasure. And thank you for writing a story that reflects that. My sincere compliments to a talented writer.
HJGrangerRocks
2008-06-30
ch 1,
abuseVery cool! Great job with a one page story!
oOoJadedoOo
2008-06-18
ch 1,
abuseI really liked this stroy very good..runs off to read the rest
almondcrescent
2008-06-14
ch 1,
abuseoh, so good. I love that the sex means so much to them. And I love the promise-ring thing. Aww, I love the whole story I think.
carson.cullen
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseaww that was sweet
and very tasteful
MrsGrint105
2008-05-22
ch 1,
abuseI almost didnt read this one, because i dont like sex fanfics. They are most of the time very pronographic and nocht in chara!

But this one was great! So thoughtful and sweet and in the right timing! Wonderful!
tresdrole
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abusecute! some spelling errors, though... :)
otteropessed523
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseI liked it a lot you just need to work on your grammer
HIMSELF not his self and there was a few spelling mistakes.
My favorite part was when she kissed his scars :)
Very cute and hott!
Owl Emporium
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseAw, that was SO sweet! I love dit; great job! :)

Angelica
DreamingLillies
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseaw this was nicely done. great sexy fluff! i love this couple... ah, good job!
-Jenna
DukeBrymin
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseVery tastefully done.
My only problem is that I'm not supportive of premarital sex--I'd much prefer that they wait until the wedding night. It seems to me to be such an important and life-changing and special thing to do, that it should only be done with one's spouse, and I, of course, like to think that Harry and Ginny would feel the same.
lovesreading2
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was Bueatiful, very well written. Its going on my favoirte list!
TaylorB07
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseBeautifully done. Love it!
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