 Lightoh is a B-word 2008-05-04 . chapter 1 I love this story. It's fantastic.
Uncle Toby seems like an **.
Just a FEW things.
You may want to change 'Eru' to 'L', since it IS his real name. L Lawliet. 'Eru' is just the way Japanese speakers pronounce it.
And Wammy's first name is Quillish. Strange, indeed. But yeah. These points just annoyed me. But the plot (so far) is wicked.
8D Keep it up. |