Loved how..everything went

Liked it. you are great at horror stories im enjoying this

*sing songy voice* Loved it. I want to find out what happens next

Loved it...it was nery interesting

I liked it. It was nice. Ima keep going to see who wins

This is most definitely one of the GREATEST AAML stories of ALL time! You really need to write more Stories. If your interested, I would LOVE to be PARTNERS. PLEASE give me your answer SOON!

i loved this stoy the twists and turns had a feeling it was procter but then i thought how did he sneak away well it was great im going to read some of your other stories now so bye

p.s keep writing

Wow... how in the world did I miss this one?

I never would have guessed that Procker was the mastermind behind everything. You know, you should try your hand at mystery in the future.

The whole story was gripping from the get go. There were many times I believed certain characters were goners but they managed to survive (only to die later). The whole 'romantic confession in the face of certain death' is a bit cliche, but for this it fits. Overall, well done.

OMG this is an AWESOME story! Scary and hilarious! Its quite an ability to do that! *Mark as Favorite Story*

Youre a great author!

I KNEW Procker was the bad guy! o

''Note to self, don't put pudding cups in microwaves,''

:D

Thank you for not killing Natty! :3

I decided that this story sounded interesting enough to read, so I sat down and read it from start to finish. I LOVED it. It was a Pokemon horror film, and I loved it. I can't really say much more than that, because I think you did amazing with this story. Great job, and thanks. ;D

This Chapter is so awesome!I love the amount of AAML! Ash and Misty forever!

Sincerly,

Vicky

wow this was a rely rely good story i do feel sad for all the people that did not make it and i am glade the Procker died but what scared me was what Procker said about Misty to Ash Isn't it obvious? I'm going to kill you and then take out each and everyone of your friends...one...by...one...except maybe your friend Misty...she is quite attractive for a mortal, maybe she can become my queen. It's a bit of a disgrace for me to mate with a human. how was he going to do that him being like a bat-thing would he be able to change her into what he was but i am glad that as all ways Ash saved the day good job 10/10 I give it

Great story gotta go bash some palletshipping sites bye.