 Mushy K 2008-05-19 . chapter 1*pretends he's not crying* T_T
That was beautiful, and I loved the different flowers you've used. I knew what some of the flowers were so it gave me a lovely mental image, but also a very sad one. I love the very last line:
"He doesn't play 'Bénédiction de Dieu dans la solitude', but he thinks he might add it to the répertoire of his next concert. "
That was what really, REALLY made me smile/cry at the same time. I'm just amazed and it warmed my heart. Kanone may have passed on, but he's still in everyone's hearts! T_T |
 adina 2008-05-08 . chapter 1 wow, i'm actually quite surprised! to see them all so carefree or, better said, resigned, unresenting... although i guess you're right when you mention that -they- don't really seem to be upset... maybe it's just me.
moo.
you made them sound very natural, anyway - and, oh my, i loved the whole kousuke's-shirt-business, that was pure gold! so very much like them, the way they all reacted - and most of all, that part at the end, when they're on the couch, i can so picture that... oh! and i giggled when you introduced the azalea there, amongst all those flowers XD
so, yeah; i can't see them this unaffected, but you still manage to make it seem perfectly normal (this is what i meant when i said, some time ago, that, to me, it seems you understand the charas very, very well 8D). and the style, i love it. as usual. |