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| let me in 2008-07-08 ch 4,  | abuseGood set up, like the details...waiting on an update. you just gotta write faster please |
| Alice-CullenRox00 2008-06-17 ch 4, | abuseoh! i like it! plz update soon!! |
| VampireQueenSeleneArtemesia 2008-06-08 ch 4, | abuseI am SO sorry that I didn't finish editing! E-Mail me and I'll give you the whole story :( Selene (P.S. the chapter was pretty perfect anyways!) |
| poisoned blood 2008-06-07 ch 4, | abuseyucky u put a cliffy! but i love this chapter. and the way u write is very nice and less sloppy than that of other writers and mine! haha. |
| estrellegoddess 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abusewow that really was very good. i loved how you used really good figurative langauge, really descriptive *hopeing for more chapters soon!* |
| freak a geek 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abuseI am VERY sorry for not being able to review on the other chapters! I was at the university for a week and had absolutely no internet where I was staying! But whe! You are finally able to do the P&P story you wanted to do! And I'm very excited to see it play out, seeing as this after all is set out in modern times, XD. So the secksy Edward and clumsy Bella are once again tripping and falling and stumbling for each other and whatever else Fergie said in her song there. Update soon my darling! SON! Love Micah |
| Gaku-chan2690 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseOh. This is going to be a good story. Cant wait for the next chapter. |
| purplecow1225 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abusei lyk it! plz update soon! ~purplecow1225 |
| xxlilyyannxx 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseyay! you are such a great updater and the story's getting really good. . . |
| LolaluvsEdward 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abusehaha poor Edward, Alice stole his wardrobe! |
| inluvwitacullen 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseWOW. Insanely good. That's all I have to say... |
| poisoned blood 2008-05-04 ch 3, | abuseHAHAHAHA omigawd now that was funny! seriously alice is so m... wat word to use? ill go with eccentric and troublesome! |
| lauraart123 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseSounds great so far!! I really like your depiction of high school, along with the preliminary descriptions of Bella and Edward. I'm assuming that Edward is not a vampire because he has green eyes, so I'll be looking forward to how you describe both his character and his family. |
| poisoned blood 2008-05-04 ch 2, | abusewat a jerk but i must feel bad for bella she's all worrying and possibly doing a load of stupidity |
| let me in 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Good use of vocabulary and teenage point of view. |