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| almondcrescent 2008-07-06 ch 3,  | abusesweet! And I really like the thing with the colours in his eyes. |
| Squizzz 2008-06-28 ch 3, | abuse"Just because I love you doesn’t mean I’ll go easy on you. You’ll have to work hard to get me to submit to you." Amazing, wonderful, fantastic *__* I loved this story, from the beginning until the very end. Very well written, good character's analysis, hilarious in some parts. I'm definitely going to read your other works ^_^ |
| zpe263 2008-06-02 ch 2, | abuseRemus shows a mixture of disgust and amusement. “That’s obnoxious. Is that your idea of romance?” “Nope. This is.” I lick the tip of my finger and wipe it on the front of his shirt. “Let’s get you out of those wet clothes.” PRICELESS! absolutly hillarious. must remember to use that line sometime. very good fanfic by the way. cute. |
| ladyBlue Wolf 2008-05-30 ch 3, | abuseYesh! dominant Remus, i dig it ^-^ -Peace. |
| Sakura evil twin of Sango 2008-05-30 ch 3, | abuseCute! |
| lori-la-strange 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseWow! This story is fantastic! It runs so smoothly. I loved the whole divorce part. And the Shakespearean part. And the Property of Sirius Black part. Okay, I loved it all! xx |
| HermyCaz 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseHey, I think that pocketwatch is working xD This story is really cute :) I liked the 'happiness' all the way through :) I liked the part with James and Sirius in chapter two...the whole..."I'll be Remus, and you can practice on how you're gonna tell him" thing. Great story! :) HermyCaz xx |
| Nefariousandrea 2008-05-26 ch 3, anon. | abusethe last sentences were absolutley beautiful |
| rachybaby 2008-05-25 ch 3, | abusebrilliant story! |
| LadyAnalyn 2008-05-22 ch 3, | abuseThis was bloody fantastic! I loved it! It was so hilarious and wonderful and sweet and very well done. TTFN |
| MrsPunk 2008-05-21 ch 3, | abuseBRILLIANT! You really had me laughing out loud at the "“Let’s get you out of those wet clothes.”"-thing. XD |
| MagicalMary 2008-05-21 ch 3, | abuseyay!! v v lovely :-) r u updating "..day of servitude" soon im really lookin foreward to it :-) thx 4 a nice read x |
| Nessa Nenharma 2008-05-19 ch 3, | abuseAww, that's adorable. Dominant Remus is fun! :D |
| Cyra Hakkai 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abuseAw! That was just so... CUTE! Perfect! Genius! You should definitely write more. Another... 80 million chapters. I would read each and every one of them. I love your writing. You did a wonderful job. I'm totally going to tell one of my friends to read it right now. I love it! -feels all warm and fuzzy inside- |
| justification to wormtail 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abuseI love your characterization of Remus and Sirius! And your idea with Remus' eyes was so neat. Most authors just make them gold or amber and stuff like that (me included) but having them be blue and get a touch of green...really awesome! :D I love this fic! Totally how I imagined they would get together. |