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| GinaStar 2008-08-30 ch 15,  | abuseVery good! |
| Puggles Master 2008-08-29 ch 15, | abusePoor Syd! First, she is under the impression Sky likes Z and now her parents our on a "break". Things are looking horrible for her. I hope that Rose and Mack patch things up, while Syd and Sky clear things up, as well. I like the explanation about the Hartfords' fear of their daughter being linked to them and getting hurt. Awesome job! Update soon. |
| MarineFlyer86 2008-08-29 ch 15, | abuselove it update soon |
| jesusfreakfairy 2008-08-29 ch 15, | abuseoh wow, i love it =] I've missed this story! i loved the dramatic addition there of it looking like Syd has left...although I reckon they might have called her. But its not my story! haha =] which is a good thing because it wouldnt be this good otherwise haha. Update soon please =] |
| Destiny45 2008-08-28 ch 15, | abuseGreat last few chapters. Oh the drama ! |
| may1331 2008-08-28 ch 15, | abusei love this story! great job! and update soon, please! |
| redforever 2008-08-28 ch 15, | abuseCUTE! Update quickly please? |
| ChristalSteele 2008-08-23 ch 14, | abuseWow awesome story very nicely done. Hope you'll update soon cheers! |
| Super ZEO Silver 2008-08-20 ch 14, | abuseI really like this story, so please keep up the good work |
| MarineFlyer86 2008-08-18 ch 14, | abuselove it update soon |
| Puggles Master 2008-08-18 ch 14, | abuseAww. Poor Sky, his good-hearted intention back fired. Great chapter. I found the hotel debacle very amusing. I love ending with Rose and Mack giving Syd the picture of her biological parents. Update soon. |
| jesusfreakfairy 2008-08-17 ch 14, | abusemel i love it =] Your writing has developed so much...i'm really loving this story. I love that you're dragging it out just the right amount too - its not a short "syd and sky fell in love the end" and its not to long. And there's plenty of moments to keep me happy, like the assult course and standing under the weeping willow (i love that tree...) I'm glad you updated - looking forward to the next chapter! =] |
| MarineFlyer86 2008-08-06 ch 13, | abuseAw so sweet love it update soon cant wait |
| GinaStar 2008-08-06 ch 13, | abuseExcellent chappie! ;) It will be interesting to read 14 to see what the reaction will be when they wake up |
| Puggles Master 2008-08-06 ch 13, | abuseI loved the girl bonding time. Giving Z some perspective to who Syd really is. I liked the ending as well, it was cute. I wonder what Mack will think of his daughter and her "friend" sharing a bed, if he ever finds out. Great chapter. Keep going. |