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Reviews For: Heart of Murder: Slayer Stormraven

dreamspeaker-jt
2008-05-13
ch 4,
abuse*digs out dusty account for this review*

^__^ It was enjoyable to read, for all that I know nothing about this game. Damien is creepy. >.> And poor Imoen. :( I didn't see her death coming.

Keep up the good work, Teeninj. ^^ Send me a mail on MMOt if you update, ya? :)
A Wee Bit Insane
2008-05-05
ch 1,
abuseA tiefling and a Bhaalspawn... a dangerous combination, and an interesting story. There is nothing wrong with altering the original plot - stories would be bloody boring if every writer would just follow what Bioware gave us. I like your tale a whole lot. :)
AlsoSprachOdin
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseWell, the Protagonist's name inspired me:

Raven, Raven, Raven, Raven, Corvus Corax... still is sitting
On the pallid bust of Pallas just above my chamber door
Raven, her poor half demonic, gothic, stoic, archetypic chick.
A brotherpair bringing tiddings, brings me tales from Middle Earth.
Monster Raven, dancing her Pas De Deux for story-teller's mirth.
Tiefling lyrics bereft of worth.

Nice to see a Thief class for once, but be careful not to fall into the sterotypical evil character trap.
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