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| NayNay72894 2008-09-23 ch 2, | abusePLZ PLZ PLZ continue this story |
| pruethesoldier 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuselove it! jack is so cute! update soon!! |
| nbclasvegasfan 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseIt's an ok beginning, but you really need to proof read and spell check before you post your stories. |
| ianodelaleza 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseyeh u shud def continue maybe make the chapters longer include some flashbak stuff 1 boy/1 girl a good setting for an american family so keep up the gd work!! H |