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NayNay72894
2008-09-23
ch 2,
abusePLZ PLZ PLZ continue this story
pruethesoldier
2008-05-12
ch 2,
abuselove it! jack is so cute! update soon!!
nbclasvegasfan
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseIt's an ok beginning, but you really need to proof read and spell check before you post your stories.
ianodelaleza
2008-05-04
ch 1,
abuseyeh u shud def continue

maybe make the chapters longer

include some flashbak stuff

1 boy/1 girl a good setting for an american family

so keep up the gd work!!

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