Your story is great! pls continue to write ..:)

Its nice, keep writing and update soon

It's really great to see the sequel of Danny & Delinda N their kids story..cant wait for the next chapter!!...Good work..:)

its a rly good start !!
i think u should finish it, i love the idea

i was hoping it would be Ed Deline as the surprise guest!

PLZ PLZ PLZ continue this story

love it! jack is so cute! update soon!!

It's an ok beginning, but you really need to proof read and spell check before you post your stories.

yeh u shud def continue

maybe make the chapters longer

include some flashbak stuff

1 boy/1 girl a good setting for an american family

so keep up the gd work!!

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