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Reviews for: Missing Scene:A Coffin for Starsky12:00am4:15am
KKBElVIS
2008-05-26 . chapter 1
I just love missing scenes!

There are so many wonderful places to add them too.

You did a great job on these two -- from ACFS!

Do you plan on more...what about the time after he gets the shot? And when he finally wakes up..do you plan on writing more.

I hope so!
Thank you for your talent,
Karen
brook5
2008-05-05 . chapter 1
love that...filling in the cracks
provencepuss
2008-05-05 . chapter 1
Nice one Joyce. The idea that Starsky had been drugged to stop him resisting never did ring true to me...drunk? Now that's perfectly feasible option.

Nice moments there. Missing scenes are never easy - excellent firt attempt...now off we go to the second story.
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