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| Opal Roseblossom 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseThat is beautiful. The last line is amazing, I loved it. "Nobody shall notice. Nobody will know[...]" That seems a little redundant. Amazing drabble, great pairing. :D I love it. |
| carino2 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome. I loved the new perspective you lend to things. And Max II is one of my favorite characters. That does it. You're going on my favorites list. |
| Maiyri 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseOkay, now I feel bad, because I'm not sure if I've reviewed anything of yours before and I probably should have. I like this. I like the fact that it's MaxII as a character and not as a cutout piece of paper in Max's shape that has no substance. I like the fact that you bother to write stuff that's outside of the box. I like that you've got a grasp of the English language and all it entails. Heh. Should. Will favourite. Mai |
| WhereRmyWingsDammit! 2008-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really, REALLY short. I this a prologue to something? =/ ~Jayy |