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nobodiez 2008-06-06 ch 11, anon.	abusehere are some idea for you who frame roger rabbit story when mario at club mario:mam-mai it sakura from cardcaptor sakura:hey mario, it been a while mario:i have seen you on TV in a long time sakura:well they cancle the show because todays kids weren't interested in me anymore mario:guess you couldn't compete with kim possible. i sorry about you show getting kick off the air. if it any constalation. manny people out there still like you. sakura:yea, even papa t46 is using me for some of his upcoming parody mario:i heard about that, and he pairing you up with that el tigre fellow. so is there any spark between you two. sakura:no we are just friends,infact he told me and this is secert, he dating that sari girl from the new transformers serie but this is between you and me and for the part about donld and daffy playing piano, about zim play the role of donld and jack spicer play the role of daffy and during their piano fight zim could use his alien technology and jack could use some shen gong wu after mario first meet browser mario could look at the reader and state:i know it my worst enemy in deguise, but i woundn't fight until it the right moment because it will runied the parody. and other ideas of who can play who ben 10 as micky el tigre as bug bunny cyborg as goofy delete as porky pig when the toon come into come in to see what happen to browser eltiger:uh sorry about the whole spare thing, it was just a joke mario:i know and no harm no fowl, ben 10:yea, for the record if it weren't toon town we would have given you a parachute, becuase we know human are not as durable as us toons and when the toon find the will, and ceabrate waffle could take out a boom box and let party pirate muppet style and sing cabbin fever song before bumble bee, bonk him on the head and state that kid stuff here a song with some jazz he start sing can you move it like this made by the ba ha men and everyone sing it
Essteka 2008-05-17 ch 11,	abuseWell, I'm quite surprised to see that you're going to do a parody of Who Framed Roger Rabbit because: 1. You already did a parody on deviantART with Sonic and Sora. 2. You didn't even announce it yet on the journal entry involving upcoming fanfictions at deviantART. Anyway, from what I see in the casting, it's gonna be one awesome parody! I mean, using Mario as Eddie Valiant because Bob Hoskins also play him in the live-action movie is a very excellent idea! You are a genius! And since Bowser is playing Judge Doom, it means that it's gonna be... a Mario vs. Bowser fanfic! I love it when a hero is facing his archennemy. As for Bowser's human form, let me guess. He will looks like Dennis Hopper, right? Anyway, it's also great that you're using Lex Luthor in a fanfic again after your Jurassic Park and Hunchback parodies. Personally, no offense to Neros Urameshi, but I don't think that Lilo, Stitch, Meg, Agnes and Billy should appear as extra with Mario and Peach. I mean, a detective with the personnality of Eddie Valiant is not the kind of guy who can have children. Also, WFRR is somekind of a parody of film noir. And I never have seen a film noir where there is a detective who has a happy family. Also, ever since that Little Mermaid parody Neros and DBV made, it seems like each time Mario appears in a parody, Lilo should also appear with. But I want to see, at least ONCE, a parody where Mario appears WITHOUT Lilo, Stitch, Meg, Agnes and Billy. Yes, I know that I give that suggestion about Lilo playing Dhandi in Ashladdin and the Leader of Team Rocket, but it was only for bringing more references to the Aladdin TV series. Anyway, it's your parody, so you decide what you want but I just want to give my opinion about Neros' suggestion. And the only thing I can do is hoping that you will take into account my opinion about this. BTW, I have some suggestions. 1-When Mario is talking to Loud about Luigi's death, he could say "I'm-a not the only one whose life have-a been changed after this tragedy. Daisy, who is-a Luigi's wife, or should-a I say Luigi's widow, was very sad. She even-a had a depression who lasted so many-a weeks." 2-At some point of the story, Loud could ask "I can't believe that I'm framed. Who framed me? Who framed me?!?" Then, a narrator could be heard as he ask "Who framed Loud Kiddington? Was it Jimbo? Mr. Garrison? Chef?" (which is a reference to the South Park season 2 episode where we learned who is Cartman's real father) Then, Loud could be puzzled as he ask "What's the point with the South Park reference?" 3-Again, at some point of the story, Loud could silently thought about Mario "This guy really hates cartoon characters. This is VERY ironic since he was the star of three ANIMATED series based on his video games." 4-This suggestion is about Anonymous But Interested's suggestion where Mario is saying to Lex Luthor "Do I LOOK LIKE Superman, or even Batman for that matter, to you?" Maybe Lex could point out "Well, everybody call you SUPER Mario, don't they?" 5-During the part where Mario is making laugh the Koopalings to death, at some point of this part, maybe he could do the "Do the Mario" dance like he did at the end of each episode of "Super Mario Bros. Super Show". 6-During the final showdown with Bowser, Mario could grab him by his tail and throw him into the Dip (like in Super Mario 64). 7-There could be an epilogue scene where, after Toon Town is safe, Mario and Peach are married and decide to adopted some kids from an orphanage (you know who are the kids that I mean). Then, Loud could appear and say to the readers "Hey! Even a guy like him can have a happy ending like in those Disney movies!" Then, Fifi could appear and say to Loud "Seeing how happy this family is, this gives me a lot of ideas for us." Then, she could kiss passionately Loud and the story ends here.
dinobot 2008-05-16 ch 11, anon.	abusewow, a who frame roger rabbit story, very interesing, i hear you are planing a horton hear a who parody, you know the people who made the recent horton movie also made the ice age movie series. every consider doing the ice age parody
slpytlak 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseThank you so much for adding Ben 10 in this chapter. I really do support Ben and Danni.
Nausicaa of the Spirits 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseOMG, I love Who Framed Roger Rabbit! It was on Cartoon Network once! Continue writing!
Phillip Clark 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseI have my own "Roger Rabbit" parody planned out as well, though for the sake of spoilers, I won't mention the cast here (however, I will suffice to say that probably unlike your's, the Looney and Disney Toons will be played by their original characters and that Hollywood will be divided into Olde Toon Town and New Toon Town). I'm also pleased that your going to be using Alex Armington II as the murder victim (I just hate that egotistical jerk Charles Roberts and his equally egotistical OC SO MUCH).
Neros Urameshi 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseI love happy endings. In your face, Coco! XD Great story! In fact, you think you could have Mario and Peach's family as extras with Mario and Peach, just curious?
Darth Ben Valor 2008-05-16 ch 11,	abuseVery nice ending, JusSonic! Awesome! Though I dunno if the dialogue with Timmy, Jimmy, and Dani makes much sense, b/c Timmy was a beaver in the beginning of the story. :\ Anyways, great work! And can't wait to see your WFRR parody! ;) Bowser: Great. I'm a bad guy again. T_T Me: Can it, Bowser. >:(
nobodiez 2008-05-16 ch 11, anon.	abusewow a roger rabbit parody, but i though you already did a roger rabbit parody, why are you doing another one
acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-05-15 ch 11,	abuseHey, great ending, and nice idea for the sequel. Keep the good writing.
Anonymous But Interested 2008-05-15 ch 11, anon.	abuseHey there. Once again, curiosity got the better of me and I'm glad I let it. Anyway, I skimmed a few of the previous chapters and I have to definitely thank you for liking my ideas enough to use them. Definitely immensely appreciated, as are the bonus scenes you worked in. Anyway, "Who Framed Roger Rabbit?" is next, huh? I have to say I LOVE that movie (even though I haven't seen it in years). In fact, I already have a few suggestions: 1. When Luthor is talking to Mario about the job he called him in for, Mario could point out that he thought the author preferred pairing Loud with Charity before Luthor points out that "First of all, Fifi is a alternate pairing for Loud that the author ALSO likes. Second, Fifi is far closer to Jessica's personality than Charity is." 2. When the fact that a toon killed Luigi is mentioned by Peach, she could mention "a flame blast from above" (referencing Bowser's flame breath for later on) rather than the piano dropping from the actual movie. 3. When the Koopalings are introduced, one of them (you decide who) could START TO call Bowser "dad", only to stop him/herself at the first "d" before saying "Boss" (obviously remembering NOT TO call him "dad" when he's in human form). 4. Instead of the Lieutenant's line in the actual movie about how he always thought there wasn't a way to kill a toon, Cid could comment that "Remember how I thought that "'the Dip'" was just a myth to scare toons into sticking to the straight and narrow? Well, Koopa found and successfully recreated the formula. In fact, he even added some extra ingredients he won't specify to give the Dip greater potency." 5. When Mario is interrogating Luthor and is threatening to kill him, Luthor could snap "You're bluffing. You hero types generally don't resort to lethal measures." and Mario could retort "Do I LOOK LIKE Superman, or even Batman for that matter, to you?" 6. When Mario asks Fifi what she sees in Loud, instead of giving Jessica's answer, Fifi could answer "Loud is the first man since Hamton back in Acme Acres to like me for my mind and heart AS WELL AS my body." and 7. When Bowser is explaining his scheme to Mario and Fifi, he could mention that "With all those toons permanently disposed of, I'll have a clear path to the Mushroom Kingdom without having to fight my way through a potentially super-powered army and be able to conquer it easily." Off of Mario and Fifi's looks Bowser could answer "What? It makes a heck of a lot more sense than that ridiculous "'freeway scheme'" from the actual movie." That is, of course, assuming you like the ideas enough to use them. If not, I profusely apologize in advance and will still look forward to that parody as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-05-15 ch 10,	abuseExcellent one! Great fight scene. Maybe, on next chapter, Coco can give Jinx a signal so she can use her powers on Cyborg to make him drop the high-heel instead of the simple trying-to-look-accidental tripping from the original movie. Keep the good writing.
Darth Ben Valor 2008-05-15 ch 10,	abuseHa ha! Take THAT, Alan! You stupid overgrown pussycat! XD Hurry, Ariel, hurry! You gotta get downstairs before the duke leaves! Please continue!
DarkMagicianmon 2008-05-15 ch 10,	abuseCoco and her daughters are going to be in a whole mess of karma next chapter
slpytlak 2008-05-15 ch 10,	abuseAriel needs to hurry!

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