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| novella2008 2008-09-04 ch 1,  | abuseThat's amazing! Great job! Keep it up! |
| itsi3 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseI'm bawling so hard! My head is killing me nad my nose is awful!! LOL Thankyou! It takes a lot to make me cry and I was tryin to find something that would either have me bawlin or laughin so THANKYOU! :) You're a REALLY great writer! Using most of my favorite lines was definately a good draw-in. ~Crystal |
| Hollie 2008-05-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseI thought this story was amazing! The ending was so sad! And your way of writing is incredible too. I loved the way that you explained all the characters feelings and emotions and also i liked the way it was more modernised into the 2nd world war. Is there going to be any more to the story? If so i'll definatley be reading it |
| Purple Shamrock 17 2008-05-20 ch 5, | abuseThis is very good! I think the chapters are bit short, but they actually work and they have a lot of description and aren't just drabbles. I have to protest chapter 5! Peter's dead! But, I will admit it was a bit pridictable as to what would happen. Good story though! Keep going! |
| Tonyboy 2008-05-14 ch 4, | abuseThis is pretty good. I'd really like to see more. |
| Simple Sparkle Shine 2008-05-14 ch 4, | abuseAw! I love it! I haven't read any Peter Pan stories before. This is my first one and it totally rocks. ~Jamie~ |
| Gabriella Janeway 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abusei love this its a little sad, please update soon. |
| hi 2008-05-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseUm... Pretty good so far... Where is Peter going again? Develop the plot a little before jumping to the adventure part. As for the rest, so far so good! |