Omg! if reviewing a hundred times would get you to upload another chapter than I would but I can't - not unless if you start UPLOADING! Please. This chapter got me hooked already and you published since 2008 but it's 2012. Please please update. I love Neverwhere and I'm sad that it doesn't have a following book. But this here feels like the sequel. Please please please update! XD

Excellent start I have a feeling I'll love it hehe.

Oh! OH NO! Ingress!

Yaya! I like this you really capture de Carabis and Richard. I'm not sure about Door though. I'll keep an eye on her. As long as she keeps that tricky, slippery mind of her's (you have the basic down) you'll create a great new Neverwhere!

I like that it is in Charlotte. Wondering how they are going to get there! Looking forward to more.

Hey you have to continue!

Interesting start. I think this could turn out really good. D

Interesting start, even if it's too early to say much more. Sounds logical that door openers are also good at closing... And a fine character portrait of the marquis. Keep writing!

] kewl, nice fic

I know you do. :) This sounds really interesting, I'd love to read more soon.