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Naive-Symphony
2009-11-10 . chapter 2
man this is a great story! i hope you come back someday and write more! i think you're a great author :D
lucis
2009-10-14 . chapter 2
THAT WAS ALL KINDS OF AWESOME! (yes, it needs to be capslock,the fic deserves nothing lesser than this)

The chapter left me foaming at the mouth. So intense! I can just faint from all the anticipation! The dance terms were nice touches to the whole story. I wish you would continue this but everyone is free to do whatever they want, certainly, you are also free to do whatever you want. So, i'll just thank you for this amazing fic and all the others that you've written. Thank you for writing fics that are worth the time that your readers take to read. Good luck on your future endeavors! We'll miss you!
chaos-chychy
2009-08-16 . chapter 2
WOW this is the first dancing themed story I've read and i am totally loving this !
Celendiar
2009-08-03 . chapter 2
Ah, this is brilliant. I've loved every single fic of yours I've read, and seeing as this is the first multichaptered and that it isn't finished, I must beg you to continue this! Because you capture their personalities perfectly, this whole idea is absolutely awesome and I'm totally in love with your writing style.

I'll be sincerely hoping for continuation!
Moxxi
2009-07-25 . chapter 2
M. I love this.
Very good idea, and you are very well informed on all the dance lingo <3
]: no clue why this hasn't been touched in a year.
Leaves me very sad...
Oh well. I love what I've read so far <3
reddoggie
2009-06-07 . chapter 2
yay! roxas gave into axel and now theyr going to dance. cant wait for the next chapp pleaz keep updatingQ!Q XP
Interrogated Pyjamas.
2009-05-14 . chapter 2
Aww, this is cute :)
Update soon, yeah?

Effy.
ilovewriting23
2009-02-24 . chapter 2
o! this is so exciting! i can't wait for more!
Tigress of India
2009-02-06 . chapter 2
Oh my God, I'm DYING to know what happens next!
SharpiesInAGayRainbow
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
Dude. You kind of... really need to finish this up.

So like, I went for a little trip down memory lane for a bit of review nostalgia. To see what stories I said were good, why, and to see if I still thought so. Many failed. And a surprising many more stayed my expectations. This one included.

I find it rather lacking in the form of Reno/Roxas.

This needs to be fixed.

Sexy tiem? Y/Y?

*siagr;
Kirah Ruth
2008-12-27 . chapter 2
Okay, allow me to be stereotypical and annoying for just, like, ten seconds here:
PLEEASE, PLEASE I BEG YOU TO WRITE MORE OF THIS.

Axel and Roxas dancing together is /amazing/. Jealous Axel is /amazing/. Absolutely everything about this story is made of pure win. (Also, despite myself, I really liked Reno. I am hard-pressed to ever /not/ like Reno, no matter how arrogant he is.)
Also, I really, really want to know more about this routine Axel has planned. It sounds... very sexy. (Well, okay, he already said that much. But Axel and Roxas dancing some sexy tango dance... sounds... mind-breaking? Something like that?)
UKELICIOUS
2008-12-18 . chapter 2
XD Oh gosh! I've not come upon such a cute fic! Please continue it as soon as you are able to. ;w;
Sea MoonDragon
2008-12-05 . chapter 2
I really love this so far! The dance element is really interesting and adds a lot, plus it has all that wonderful AkuRoku ^_^ I can't wait for the next update, you've done a nice job so far!
Emerald Moonrose
2008-11-24 . chapter 2
Oh my gosh. This is so awesome. I haven't read a story like this, and this is really nicely done. I was internally squealing at the entire thing. I really hope you continue this. It's so awesome!

Can't wait!
Jayrin Paige
2008-11-23 . chapter 2
Whoa, that was intense. O:

XD Yay for Roxas and Axel's dancing skills! Woohoo!
Update soon :D
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