awwwwwwww totsl cutness fluff! i loved it!

amazing story ! congrats

As I am too in a rush to tell you how amazing your story is I didn't log in. It was brilliant. I loved Parker's innocence and understanding. I could see it happening. (It's a pity this doesn't happen in the show it would be a perfect way to advance their relationship!) I can't wait to read more of your writing.

Karin, this is fantastic, I really loved it, I had tears in my eyes. For your first Bones fan fic and also considering the fact that English isn't you native language, this is marvelous! I really love it, well done!

very sweet. i loved it. :)

Parker is so sweet. I love fics where he makes an appereance. This one was particularly good because you nailed down Brennan perfectly and having parker walking in on her an offering to be her family was so wonderful, it brought tears to my eyes.

Thanks for sharing.

Very well written, loved the play of the words and thoughts between Parker & Bones.

And agree with the thoughts on what a family can be etc.

A very thought provoking story.

this is so adorable. omg...I 3 Parkerfics.

Good job, it was so well written.

that was good loved it

that was so sweet! i freakin love parker and his adorableness!

I LOVED it it is soo swweet and so cute aww

This was so GOOD! I love all the Brennan/Booth/Parker stories - they're the best!

A very moving story. Good characterization.

I found the story very involving, it is written in a pleasing, flowing style. Very beautiful! Im looking forward to your next story. And your english is excellent!

wow. that is beautiful. can't believe this is your first fic. the writing is beautiful with details and emotion and you wrote parker so perfectly and brennan and booth. just a wonderful scene. i wish it was real! :) great great work.