I love it. They're exactly how I imagined them, and I love your descriptions, ( smell of Coca-Cola. perfect. ) the talk about Mello's accents, kanji graffiti, shoplifting. The little things. Perfect.

And the end. About the guns and people killing people. Made me cry. Really. And I don't cry very often. T_T

Aw. I like Matt's...morals shining through in the last line. Hes a good guy. XD

You're writing style is so interesting.

I liked a lot of the little bits in this. Old Coca-Cola, Matt's American accent (I kinda see him speaking with an American accent, too), Matt not being able to be Kira (you're right. Mello maybe, but not Matt), Matt's Japanese being rusty, Japan having good games (like what?)...

Very enjoyable and eye-catching.

Something about this fic just stood out. You're fics are so different from many of the Death Note fics I've read before. So detailed and above all wonderfully in-character. Another fave.

I liked that a lot. I thought it was clever and pretty - nicely done character interaction, even if it was mostly dialogue. I'm really intrigued by Matt and Mello's non-friendly friendship, and you captured it well. You have a wonderful way with words, real, nicely chosen, and crushing at the right times. Reading your work is like listening to a rock song while drinking in the character's perspective. Great job. ^^

That was an absoluely wonderful read -- the style, the language, the riveting conversation b/w the two. Just what I needed after a long day of work. I honestly felt so refreshed after reading this piece. Bravo.

Gah, Ani Difranco. Sweet.

That whole paragraph about it smelling like old Coca Cola... YES. That's the sort of setting I always see those two in, too. They're just... such dirty city boys, hahaha.

I've gotta say... before I read this, I never thought to contemplate their accents. :P

"Kira’s second-rate. He doesn’t do his own dirty work." Amen, Mello. Amen to that.

You know, if you dig through the dross long enough, you might be lucky enough to come across a great little fic - like this one. I love your writing style, the easy interaction between the characters and the way you keep the reader intrigued. Very clever and very enjoyable. Thank you.

I liked this one a lot. Then again, I like all of your Death Note stories; you have a very unique writing style.

(...and your attention to spelling and grammar is very much appreciated.)

This was really interesting. I loved, "Probably not Iceland.", great line. Also, I agree with you; Mello might have been a Kira, had circumstance led to it, but Matt doesn't seem to have the motivation.
I really like your writing style. It's so interesting and easy to read. Liked the ending line, too.

Your stories are always so interesting! I can't tell if they're extremely clever with deep, hidden metaphors, like modern art, or if they're...well...not. :/ They're more clever than not, though, but your writing style certainly is very different from the others I've read. But not in a way that's uncomfortable to the reader, though. It's new and fresh and original. Indeed. But it's puzzling, sometimes, nonetheless.