i loved it

I admit, I usually don't enjoy most fan-fiction for this pairing, but yours was very nicely written.

dwah
good job, i really liked it, no constructive c's or anything of the sort so this will be short sorry :P

God, I love this and you are bloody awesome for writing it. What else can I say?

Aw .cute !
it's lovely !

Awh.. This was so sweet, I love it

Aw this is such a cute story! I was wondering, are you going to continue it, or was it just a one-shot? You should continue it! :P

aww, too cute. and somehow still in character. nice job.

AW, and where is Malik in all of this? Was he allowed to go out? He hangs with Ryou?


O.o

Well I think that makes sense. LOL I just like them together. LOL

Seriously, he wasn't home. What's their deal with Marik?? LOl

I mean, you turn a few dozen people into mind slaves, attempt to kill a few people, steal, and threaten your host and family with the shadow realm and they just can't get past it. :P

Pretty awesome, this was a great read.

wow i really liked this story! its great. ^~^

;_; Pure awesome.

Cute story. Marik needs to move out. Isis is not giving him a chance.

Aw, I really liked this. Cute idea. Good job. ^^