This iz so good!i luff the stevexchristie pairing,and this iz just great!no rushing,but plz update,i luff it!

CINTINUE PLEASE!

Hi there! nice work and I love it! Ahm can I give you a comment about your work? Please add some kissing scene or bed scene in your fanfic and i assure you that it would be a hit! Well, keep up the good work! I'll subscribe to your story because I like it very much!

write more!

hey can you please update soon. thx

Hey ho. It's taking a while for me to get through this, but oh well. Good chapters. I'll have to read more. Thumbs up to you.

Poor Christie. Nothing ever seems to go right for her. Steve should honestly be her Prince Charming and save her from her tower of despair.

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Uh, ignore that last part. Very interesting chapter not to mention emotional. Nice!

BAH! STEVE THE CHEESE LOVER?! -is allergic to cheese-

“However, American food has fat and I did gain a few pounds because of it. But you can't resist the temptation of American food,” Steve said as he took another bite of his burger, and then his fries. - So true XD Well I dunno how fattening they are out there but... they're generally fattening haha.

'...being chase...' - 'chased'.

“Yeah your right...' - Don't wanna be an ** (though by this I probably am being, so sorry in advance) but this is the wrong 'your/you're'. The one you've put is as in 'your bag' - belonging to someone. The one you're looking for is 'you're', which is 'you are'. Be careful with this, and the 'their/there/they're' thing; they confuse a lot of people and take a lot of time to get used to, okay?

World Gym? Nice name :D

'...I can't abandoned it.' - Can't 'abandon'. He hasn't abandoned it yet.

Whoa? RICKY FURY? THAT IS AWESOME, BRYAN WITH A BROTHER, ZOMG. THAT. IS. AWESOME. Y'know. You should do a fic with Ricky lololol. That'd be even AWESOMER XD

MORE OMGWTFBBQ. NO. T3H GRANDPA DIEDZ0RZ. :( MEAN. But. This was a FANTASTIC idea for a plot device.

'...she know of.' - 'know' to 'knew'.

RICKY TOO??! YOU'RE MEAN Y'KNOW THAT??! :(

'...was the targeted and was gun down.' - 'targetted' to 'target', 'gun' to 'gunned'.

'Steve kneel down to her and...' - 'kneel' to 'knelt'. The fic is in past tense, stay that way, k? :)

'He helped Christie up to her feet and wiped the tears away for her.' - Adorable :3

Great update! Very intense and really sets the ball rolling again after your absence. Welcome back, and OMG MORE INTENSE?! SWEET!!

It seems that Christie just keeps going through one tragedy after another.I feel bad for her, I wish that Steve would comfort her properly cause if he doesn't she could be tramatized greatly.

Hey ho. Slowly crawling my way through the story, and this story is certainly exciting enough to keep me interested, if anything. I will seriously have to read the rest some time. Thumbs up to you.

Hey ho. Flicked through the reviews, and decided it would be a good idea read it, due to the good feedback you're getting. I've only got time for the first chapter, and sweet mercy I can see why you get the feedback. Brilliantly original idea, cleverly written, allowing for a few grammer mistakes, and greatly atmospheric. Thumbs up to you.

Yay, it's Lei! (Ooh, it rhymed). And LOL at pervy Hwoarang, that part was hilarious XD. Aah, Steve and Christie are sharing a room, what could possibly go wrong? *stares innocently*

Nice update. A few errors but I can't point them out atm. Still in Tafe.

“If I told you that you're the prettiest girl in the world, then what am I to you?”

“I guess a charmer.”

“And what if I told you I want to lick you up and down, then what am I to you?”

“A red-haired pervert name Hwoarang.” - LMAO.

Keep it up.

Nina and Steve have one thing in common; they like blowing stuff up (refer T5 endings) :). And the part where Nina slams the brakes and makes Steve hit his head, haha! Happened to me once, ouch. Hmm, are we getting closer to a Steve/Christie 'moment'? He's finally admitted that he likes her, aww :D. Catch ya later!

Yo.

"Inside a dark room, a dark-skinned man with dreadlocks sat in a chair where guys in black tuxedos surrounded the room. His eyes shifted beneath his dark shades looking at each of the guys in the room. He didn't trusted them one bit. He had no idea why there were he at his luxury mansion, but they told them their boss needed a word with him. It was about his capoeira pupil, Christie Monteiro." - Really like this. A lot. GO EDDY! Btw. Take out the 'ed' in 'trusted', so it'll just leave 'trust'.

"He finds it disrespectful and before he even knew Christie, he had made her call him by his surname until he felt comfortable with her calling him by his first name." - Aw! XD

"“And what does this have to do with Christie?” Eddy asked, arching his eyebrows and leaning forward on the table, cupping his hands together." - Sweet! Little details always make the story move :D

"...that if she stays involve, something..." - If she stays 'involved'.

"...Christie being kill because..." If she was 'killed'. But still, you're paying attention, and that's good. Again do not look my way for a description.

“Oh god, I knew I should of put on some pants instead of these booty shorts if I knew something like this would occur,” Christie said.

“I don't mind it at all Christie. Watching your butt sway from side to side like that turns me on!” Steve grinned. - LOL. Typical men XD

"...she couldn't not at this..." - Remove 'not', because then it'll read 'couldn't', which is 'could not' anyway :\

The Nina abruptly stepped on the brakes, causing Steve to hit his head on the dashboard. - XDXDXD PWN3D.

Good update.