Great story! Thanks for writing this! LOL, this was funny! God bless!

I liked this. It was a nicely developed scene from their adentures. I'd like to know why Kury was so hell bent on killing the devaronian, but in some ways the way you tell the story makes it irrelevant.

My only real critique is that the last line is a tad preachy and unnatural... It might be a little more natural if we knew a little more about what had happened between the two, though.

Anyhow, nice job. :D

Wow. I am terrfied of General Kuryama Nari. If I were a DS male Revan I would go to the Unknown Regions and stay there or at least do something pretty d- significant to help the galaxy. Way to write a passionate and powerful story that made my blood run cold.