omg thank you so much for writing this fic i was so excited =]

Aw!! Continue it!! :D PLEASE? I at least want to know if, in this story, Urahara has feelings for her; if she "saw something in his eyes" =D I liked it!! Maybe Urahara hugs her for a second or something o.O??

j-y

that was a sweet story :]
i always wondered how Urahara-san and Hiyori would meet again :]

Poor Hiyori-chan-trying to hug her-
Hiyori-punch- Don't touch me ya idoit!

really nice!

Umm...I'm pretty sure it was Aizen who turned Hiyori and the others into vizards.

Wow, this is a
very interesting
pairing, indeed!
Their relationship
on Hiyori's side is
full of pain
and hate... yet, on
Urahara's side, it's
just nonchalance and
slight amusement...

This was a very good
story! I enjoyed
reading it!

awesome! pretty good fic.

ka there is not enough fics about the vizards around please please write more!

I like stories that center around these two , its become a favorite even as a pairing oddly enough.I like how this was written so well ,how you potrayed Hiyori was percise and done extremly well from her actions to her last words and that sentance.Good job ^_^

*Content sigh* I've really enjoyed the Hiyori/Urahara interactions in the past chapters, and I REALLY enjoyed this deliciously angsty reunion-fic. You kept both Hiyori and Urahara in character, and have made me extremely excited for when they are finally reunited in the manga. Great job, again, and write a sequel! Please? *bambi eyes*

I like! Your Urahara is scarier and more inscrutable than I thought possible!