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| IHateSnakes 2008-07-03 ch 8, | abuseDon't apologize, you're doing well. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| abeatticus 2008-07-01 ch 8, | abuseGood chapter. I like the direction of the story. |
| G-Matt 2008-06-28 ch 8, | abuseExcellent chapter! All the drama was so well-written! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Breezy 2008-06-25 ch 7, anon. | abuseGur ! Cliffhanger !! But that's why I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I truly mean it ! =] -Breezy |
| abeatticus 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abuseInteresting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
| G-Matt 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abuseNice chapter, with a great cliffhanger ending! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| abeatticus 2008-06-20 ch 6, | abuseGood chapter and good story overall. I like the idea of seeing how another person could've impacted the situation. |
| G-Matt 2008-06-20 ch 6, | abuseVery nice chapter. I'll be looking forward to seeing if Jess really kisses Leslie on New Year's Day... |
| IHateSnakes 2008-06-18 ch 5, | abuseNice story. Keep writing. ihs |
| G-Matt 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseNice chapter. Keep it up! |
| IHateSnakes 2008-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood start...I'll read more soon. ihs |
| J.Kovacs 2008-06-17 ch 5, | abuseCan't wait for more! |
| G-Matt 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseA truly brilliant chapter! I love the way how you include scenes from the movie into your story. Great work! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| WriterOfAThousandWords.Bree... 2008-05-24 ch 3, | abuseI really liek where this is going! I lvoe the character of Lucas. He's relatively got the same personality as Jess, but moved to Lark Creek, just like Leslie did. He's sort of a mix of the two. Well, actually, he is! Anyway. Keep writing, and get well soon! The flu stinks! -Breezy |
| abeatticus 2008-05-11 ch 3, | abuseStory is turning out fine. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter. |