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IHateSnakes
2008-07-03
ch 8,
abuseDon't apologize, you're doing well. I look forward to the next chapter.
abeatticus
2008-07-01
ch 8,
abuseGood chapter. I like the direction of the story.
G-Matt
2008-06-28
ch 8,
abuseExcellent chapter! All the drama was so well-written! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Breezy
2008-06-25
ch 7, anon.
abuseGur ! Cliffhanger !!

But that's why I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter, and I truly mean it ! =]

-Breezy
abeatticus
2008-06-24
ch 7,
abuseInteresting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
G-Matt
2008-06-24
ch 7,
abuseNice chapter, with a great cliffhanger ending! Can't wait for the next chapter!
abeatticus
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseGood chapter and good story overall. I like the idea of seeing how another person could've impacted the situation.
G-Matt
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseVery nice chapter. I'll be looking forward to seeing if Jess really kisses Leslie on New Year's Day...
IHateSnakes
2008-06-18
ch 5,
abuseNice story. Keep writing. ihs
G-Matt
2008-06-17
ch 5,
abuseNice chapter. Keep it up!
IHateSnakes
2008-06-17
ch 1, anon.
abuseGood start...I'll read more soon. ihs
J.Kovacs
2008-06-17
ch 5,
abuseCan't wait for more!
G-Matt
2008-06-05
ch 4,
abuseA truly brilliant chapter! I love the way how you include scenes from the movie into your story. Great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
WriterOfAThousandWords.Bree...
2008-05-24
ch 3,
abuseI really liek where this is going! I lvoe the character of Lucas. He's relatively got the same personality as Jess, but moved to Lark Creek, just like Leslie did. He's sort of a mix of the two. Well, actually, he is! Anyway. Keep writing, and get well soon! The flu stinks!

-Breezy
abeatticus
2008-05-11
ch 3,
abuseStory is turning out fine. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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