Hwa... please continue please please PLEASE!
ONEGAI!

Love it!

OI! Author-sama, when is the next chapter coming out? You are leaving us in this awful suspense :/

wow, this is great~
I love OkiKagu!
please update soon :)

XD SOUGO IS J E A L O U S( i want to blast Edo too >.<) !!MORE MORE PLEASE !!

great fic! Please update soon! The suspense is killing me! And I dont want to die.

O! SOUGO'S JEALOUS!! =D omg it's not fair to just leave us hanging please come out with the new chapter soon!

oops, sorry. really sorry. DX completley ignore my first comment, the critic part. i dont think my suggestion gives any help now, after reading that awesome chapter, and if anything, will subtract from your performance. ^__^; Keep up the good work!

Is it okay if i critique here? Um. I think you use too many what i call 'full' sentences. Like commas, very long sentences overall. i think you should blend in just a few short ones. :) But your grammer and everything was awesome, and i really did enjoy reading it so if you don't want to, don't mind me.

I really liked your story! OkixKagu + Kagura owning as a sweeper! i'm also a little curious as to everything else, but i'm hoping to see that later seeing as ive only read just one chapter so far, I'm looking forward to seeing that! XD!! Well, off to read more :)

OMG!
This is so cute XD
Will you continue this story??
cause it's been a long time since you updated anything here but I'm really interested what'll happen next! XD

LOVE IT~ Well-written, and I hope you'd continue writing this one *pleads* I'm really interested in seeing how Okita (suffers) because of Kagura's plan, and why Gin-chan and the others are gone

Ah! Nice, funny story! I hope you'll update soon!

Hola!!

...tal vz no entiendas lo que escribo ...pero no se escribir en ingles ...pero lei tu fic xq lo traduje ..pero m encanto jajajaja me dio mucha risa ..ya me estaba imaginando xq kagura le habia pedido de frente a èl que se su novio jajja ...y todavia dice ...si un novio ami propia elecciòn ...pobre okita se habra hehco ilusiones jajajjaa ..la verdad hasta yo mismo me quedo biquiabierta cuando kagura dijo que se lo iba a pedir a gin-chan jajajajaj ...bueno actualiza pronto ...


Sayonara

koolio!
please update soon!

wow this is interesting I really want to know what happens next
plz update soon XD