-holds hands out for Lloyd plushie- When I saw the chapter title, this is not what I was expecting.

But I like it. XD In fact, I adore the whole fic. All 2 marvelous chapters of it. Such beautiful father/son fluff! -squeals-

Yay! Finally a fic where Kratos comes back! Thanks.

I really really like this story! I had it saved the first write-up that you did and i was sad that it wasnt finished but I think the rewrite is really really good and i hope you update soon!

This was very cute_ Thank you for reviewing my story. I liked your idea how Kratos returned to earth. I always wanted to in the game, but I'm glad he did in your fic.

That was so sweet! I love it! Yay for oyako fluff!

Nono: Yes, kupo! It was really good! We read the original version of this story and this is definitely a big improvement, kupo. More details, better descriptions, the words flow better, and it's a lot cuter, kupo!

Yeah definitely! I love it! *squeals*

Alfador: But I have a few problems. First of all, get rid of the Author Notes. They distract the reader from the story and can be very annoying. Also, there's these two lines:

“And look! My wings, they changed! It couldn't of been more then a week after you left!” (2)

It took him a few moments to notice, but it dawned on Kratos, that the wings that now rested on his son's back, were a perfect replica of his own. (3)

Alfador: What's with the (2) and (3)? Sorry, but I find them completely unnecessary. Moving on, you better have a good reason for why Zelos is back. People don't normally come back from the dead, you know. I mean, unless you use a Life Potion or something, but that's only in battle. And finally, what the heck is a thunderstorm doing in the middle of a snow city? I hope you have a good reason for this, other than to create oyako fluff. But other than that, it's good.

But you know what? I love the oyako fluff, so if it makes Lloyd bond with his father, let it thunderstorm wherever whenever! Anyways, update soon! I really love this story! Oh, and thanks for the Lloyd plushie! Although, I don't know what I'm going to do with it... Eh, whatever. *favs and alerts*

You write kratosxlloyd fluff so well :3 i really hope you keep writing about this cause it what i've always wanted to happen ever since i finished tos.

MUAHAHA LLOYD PLUSHIE

Great story! keep up the great work :)

Your stories are great! Update soon!

hehe, i really like it

it's kinda funny to see how kratos is a little...err...

confused how to handle this kind of situation .

will there be another chapter?

*wanna have a lloyd plushie* XD

just kidding .

sorry for my bad english

this version is so much better,it has so much more it up,i cant wait to read more!-

Much better than on your original account. I'm looking forward to some more new chapters! And thank you for not making this an incest story. I LOVE Kratos and Lloyd but not that way. :)

- Aemiz

Aw, that was so precious...n.n

MY LLOYD PLUSHIE! n.n

hm. My only suggestion would be to not put A/N in the story itself, and leave them for at the end. they disrupt the flow of the story, and ruins the mood you have going.

yeah. otherwise -claps- aweosme job!

Lloyd plushie? -puppy dog eyes-

Bucky.

Awesome!

I like it so much!

It's better than the older one and so lovely -

So much oyako!

Wow. This is a good story so far. I like it!

Poor Lloyd. Scared of storms. . .but hey, it's cute!

Alright, alright. Seriousness now, srsly.

Grammar errors are few, and there's the occassional missplaced word. . .that makes sense if you reread the sentence over oO

Of course, I was just sick, so my brain might still be out of it -.-

Keep on Writin'!