Reviews for The Children of the Storm

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kbean 2008-07-04 ch 10,	abuseI loved it! I have a couple little critiques to say, though. I apologize, and I realize I point out less wrong with your stories than anyone else's. I think I've become a hard critique, and I can't even see what's wrong with my own stories. It's that it's not the Highrock, it's the Skyrock, I thought...And they talk to SkyClan's ancestors, not StarClan, because StarClan don't watch over that part of the skies.
brackenfoot 2008-06-19 ch 10, anon.	abuseThat was a great series, and the ending was beautiful
Black Wolf Jaganshi Lover 2008-06-04 ch 10,	abusedancing go cloudpaw, go cloudpaw, woot! Laters!
Puppyscruffy 2008-06-01 ch 10,	abuseWOW AWSOME ENDING!
Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-06-01 ch 10,	abuseMe: Heh... Thunderfang... Thunder Fang... Luxray: (growls) Me: I didn't mean you had to use the stinkin' move! Anyways... Cloudlight... somehow, I keep thinking of "Cloudflight" instead. The ending was cute, though. I'm going to miss this story - it and the prequel were my favorites of your work.
Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-06-01 ch 9,	abuseHmm... Dawnsong, eh? A little hard to pronounce, but it makes me think of a really pretty morning sky... Lightningsky is nice, too, if not a little long. I miss Cloudpaw, but I'm hoping for something good to happen in the end.
Leafecho 2008-05-31 ch 10,	abuseYES! A WARRIOR NAME FOR CLOUDPAW! I love the name Cloudlight... Although I can say that clouds don't gie off light... but it's poetic nonetheless. And I kind of have to say... Hawkfoot? Interesting, though... Do hawks have feet? Don't worry about my wonderings, I criticize too much... But rats! The main character lives afterall... That stinks =) I like it when they die a tragic death.
Leafecho 2008-05-31 ch 9,	abuseAw... I feel bad for Stormstar (great leader choice, by the way). Cloudpaw was a good character. Could you maybe give her a warrior name? Stormstar could give it before the vigil is over.
Leafecho 2008-05-31 ch 8,	abuseDon't worry, I didn't panic. I loved it! I love misery! At least in stories... not in real life... But I absolutely ADORE stories that kill off the main characters! There are so few stories that do that, that I relish the chance to read one that does. Romeo and Juliet, for example, were killed at the end of the story. It's a refreshing read from the happy, rainbow, unicorn stories of happiness!
Snowfeather5 2008-05-31 ch 9,	abuseAww. I love happily ever afters. Though it was sad that Cloudpaw died, it would've been too...convienent if she had lived you know? I think that this is one of the best stories I've read on Fanfic. You truly are a great author. I hope you'll be posting a new story soon, as I love to read your work. Anyways, can't wait for the epilogue, and hopefully a new story!
Snowfeather5 2008-05-31 ch 8,	abuseAH! OH NO! If either one of them die I'm going to cry. sniff sniff You'd better update soon so that I don't have to live too long in suspense. So please keep posting!
Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-31 ch 8,	abuseWAH! CLOUDPAW! NO! Don't worry, Silverfire - I would never get cross with you. As for Hawkpaw... well, that's an entirely different story. Hopefully you'll update while I set off to beat that cat into a pulp. (snarls and chases after Hawkpaw)
Feathertail's Loyalty 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseOh. My. Gosh. I LOVED Cloudpaw'a argument with Dawnstar and her speech! That is probably my favorite chapter so far, and Cloudpaw is still such a smart little kitty! (cheers for Cloudpaw) She and her family is BOUND to win!
Snowfeather5 2008-05-28 ch 7,	abuseOH. MY. GOD. THAT WAS COMPLETELY AWESOME! This is a great story, please update soon, I don't know if I can handle the suspense.
Puppyscruffy 2008-05-26 ch 6,	abuseomg!! wow your really talented! i hope you write more soonn!

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