i do wish this would be updated, it one of my favorites !! please pretty please !!

this is awesome ^_^ i loved "no defense for you" and was sad that it ended so abruptly. it's nice to finally get more of that story, and you do a great job of keeping the feel of the story and writing the same (even while adding your own style to it). i hope you plan to add more to this sometime, i'll definitely be back to read it

First off, I love the way you write this. It's extremely well written, and really sticks to the personalities of the characters. Keep up the good work, and can't wait till the next chapter is released. Should be rather interesting to see how you go about this.

I enjoyed this story... It was the first time that I've read something other than ShizNat in English. Good work.
Can't wait for uplate. >_<

I've really enjoyed reading this story. I hope that you update it soon. It'll be nice to see what happens next.

this is a great story. I'd love to read more.

*sigh* You have officially got me handcuffed to your story. And you've thrown away the key. I have to say...Hermione is so bloody cute while being totally in character. I don't think Hermione could be any cuter. As for Fleur...God bless her. - Flirt. ^.^

Update soon!

here's a question: when are you going to update? I don't mean to sound pushy but you NEED to. This fic is like air to me I need it to live! I love it that much, In my opinion I like this version a bit better then the original is that bad? >.< Update please :3

Excellent. I'm not a real fan of femmeslash but hey. This is interesting. Please update soon. And... well, I think that you somehow left out the rest of the world? How they are at school, about Hermione's confidence, Harry, Ron and blah. More of the interactions, really. Though, I'm still kinda hooked anyway. :D

Started reading Dreiser's and then this, and I am hoked. The only thing I regret about reading both Dreiser's and this fic was that I couldn't stop until I reached 28, and now I'll have to wait for the next chapter like everyone else xD. I've taken to rereading it now :P.

Seriously, I really like what you've written thus far. There were some parts during the France visit that felt a bit long, though I suppose they were also neccessary. I love seeing things from Fleur's POV, you really get a feel of her "affliction" and the pain inherent in loving someone that way. Keep up the epic work ;).

That was a cute chapter, can't wait for the next.

Aw nice chapter. It's nice they get to use the portkey. I hope you'll update again soon. :)

I liked the subtle humour you implemented in the Dumbledore bit! X}

Sweet, real and well written.

Wow the chapter was ... fast!

But do not matter, I hope that you update again soon!

A greeting from mexico! xD

xoxo

Luckily they can now use a port key. I can't wait to see how her parents react to the news. Great update.