Cool. The first Star Wars fanfic I've read. It posed some interesting questions for the Sith did it not? Thanks for posting! :)

I like the idea that you have with this...it's fun to think of the pasts of characters.

Great job!

This is really interesting... you don't see many fics about Palpatine when he was younger. Nicely done!

Most excellent! Extremely well written, and and how you portray Palpatine is quite a good estimation of what he might have been like in the past. I did notice a couple, only a couple, little typing errors within, but none were very bad errors.

I eagerly await the next chapter.