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| chase A dream 2008-09-15 ch 2,  | abuseHey! great story really enjoyed this... |
| GibbsFan 2008-08-28 ch 1, | abuseGreat Story...Thanks for the fun! Also a big JAG Fan! You should do some stories along this line with Harm & Mattie. I think (if you've seen the episodes with Mattie) there is some good stuff to go on. Like when Mattie threw a fit when Harm invited her Dad to dinner. Or like when Jen Coates & Harm thought maybe Mattie had run away because she was late coming home. You could use the whole problem with drinking. Also could bring in Chloe. Just some thoughts. |
| ficwriterjet 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseThanks for the story, I enjoyed it. I love the image of Tony and Abby watching a tape of their unsuspecting friends. LOL. Loved Gibbs showing up behind them - very in character for him. And I liked that Tony argued with him about going over his lap, but Gibbs forced the issue. Loved the last line; it seems like something Tony would say. Jet |
| draggon-flye 2008-05-07 ch 2, | abuseThis is hillarious, and I can so see it happening. And Gibbs' 'if you behave like a child, I'll treat you like one' attitude is totally believable. |
| Balou 2008-05-07 ch 2, | abusegreat, very good... |
| supergirl3684 2008-05-07 ch 2, | abusebest story yet hun! |
| SaintAugustana 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseGotta say, they pretty well deserved that one. xD I seriously lol'd picturing the look on Gibbs' face... “I…..was not…making out…..with the Director Abby.” (roars with laughter) |
| Celena Caine 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseGreat story. Liked the fact that Abby was stickin her foot in her mouth it was rather funny. |
| poohbear123 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abusego gibbs! great story |
| M E Wofford 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseDear Heavens, they never learn!! They deserved it. I can actually see this happened. He is such a father figure to most everyone on that show that it really works |
| aserene 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuse*chuckles* oh that was good, that was just what i needed. An excellent laugh. Poor Kids, you think they would learn. |
| Chloey1980 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseGreat story. I love Gibbs treating them like little kids bend over their dads knee. |
| sasha1600 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseYet another reason not to mess with a Marine ;-). Nicely done. |
| crazy4gibbs 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abuseSo they got chastised by their ex-marine daddy. I liked Tony's excuse of his athletic muscular stature being too big. Don't think Gibbs is ever gonna be successful in spanking their childlike behaviour out of them. (At least, I don't hope so!) |
| AislingK 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseThat's a very creative premise! Will Jen be getting invovled, or will Gibbs be dealing with this one on his own? |