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| VampGirl300 2008-07-24 ch 13,  | abuseThis story is so good please write more! |
| Kyramy 2008-07-22 ch 13, | abuseHeya x Luurve the chappie brillopads as ever :P BTW Dorriens hair is brown in the books like Rothens "His hair was brown but it had streaks of grey in it" |
| carolinecullen 2008-07-22 ch 13, | abuseIt' s really great! Please continue, update ASAP!! I'm waiting for more. |
| O Draconian Devil 2008-07-22 ch 13, | abuseWow...I didn't know Dorrien was that stupid. Nice chapter! It was quite funny ^_^ |
| Lily-x-Lily 2008-07-21 ch 13, | abuseHey! I loved Sonea's POV ! (I loved Dorrien's Pov too, in fact...) :p Very good chapter! "I hate my life" ! XD |
| Kyramy 2008-07-17 ch 12, | abuseHeya x Awesome chappie's luurve the twists So glad i'm not Sonea right now total ek moment. Keep it up Kyramy x |
| GoluxOracle 2008-07-17 ch 12, | abusepoor Sonea, that must have been so embarassing! You shouldn't be so ** yourself this chapter wasn't terrible like you made it out to be -- a little on the short side but still good. Anyway this review will get you closer to 24. =) |
| O Draconian Devil 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseoh my god. that must have been SO embarrassing! Poor Sonea, so many things re going wrong in her life right now. It wasn't a ** chapter, as you put it, I quite enjoyed it - it was good, so don't be too ** yourself. |
| Lily-x-Lily 2008-07-15 ch 12, | abuseHahaha ! Poor Sonea ... This chapter isn't bad at all! I liked it ! |
| GoluxOracle 2008-07-13 ch 11, | abuseAw poor Lorlen... no-one ever seems to tell him what's going on. Sorry I haven't reviewed again before now it's still going great though and getting interesting. Although I think that the explanation wasn't totally necessary -- we probably could have worked it out but it did help some. |
| Lily-x-Lily 2008-07-13 ch 11, | abuseHaha ! ^^ I love Lorlen and Akkarin ! |
| O Draconian Devil 2008-07-13 ch 11, | abuseI feel for Lorlen...he's absolutely clueless to what's going on. Great chapter! |
| Lily-x-Lily 2008-07-12 ch 10, | abuseVery good! ;D |
| Lily-x-Lily 2008-07-12 ch 8, | abuseHey! Sorry, I couldn't write a review earlier, I was busy ( Holiday) It's still great! |
| Kyramy 2008-07-11 ch 10, | abuseWOW! Awesome story keep it up luurve it! Kyra x |